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Excellent chapter update.......
thanks

you and those damn clif-hangers!! Just teasing, I can't wait for the next chapter. and p.s., ignore people who say you're bouncing around...its called building a story with a plot. As long as you finish with a strong ending, this will be a terrific story (and terrific doesn't begin to describe it!)

Congratulations on breaking through 100 reviews - well done!!!
Another exciting chapter !!!!!

Chriscent, I feel like I'm treading water in this story... where is it going? The beginning started off with a definite direction (Bell and Riddick trying to get off of the planet) and although there was no strong direction in places (after Riddick left Bell), it didn't last for long. I've been trying to figure out the point to the story for the past ten or so chapters. What is the reason for this new Necro campaign? Better question: what is the long-term goal for the two main characters? ...Family? ...Purpose? I guess that I just feel lost when the characters seem to simply be going through the motions, because I am too: I read each chapter and am left feeling that nothing happened. Let me know if it's just me, 'cause it probably is! :p Thanks! ~alenanoemi

This is pretty amazing... I've always loved the movie.. and it seems like this should be a scene in it. Nice work! It's a great read.

Coolness, you updated! this is my favorite story that i have read on any Fanfiction site. Really it is!

Ooh, good question. What does Riddick want? Betcha That's gonna take him a while to figure out.

The story is really heating up, but I love that the characters are still human. Riddick is jealous and Bell can't give head, those things make them more real.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Aurora

Chriscent you are absolutely my favorite fanfiction writer. I have read all you stories and especially like the Fast and the Furious one you did with Darynn, that was a gem! This story is a close second though and may pass it in the end, please let me know when you update it again.
P.S. MAN! Do you know how to write cliff hangers, i'm practically drooling here :P

hey, me again. had a posting error. Here's my name and email at lilygirl07832@yahoo.com

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I've just finished all forty chapters and have to admit that I'm addidcted to this story.
Such a mature, intelligent and emotional Riddick story is rarely seen.
Well done to you on writing this wonderful story.