rate_review Reviews

OMG! You are amazing. I love Bella, have I told you that yet? It's so rare that there is a strong female character that isn't, yah know, drop dead gorgeous or supremely perfect. Bella is real and I love her.

Ooh, she's gonna be in trouble later though, Riddick may not be the overly affectionate sort but he probably feels like he's being upstaged by a syn he already hated, can't wait for that shoe to drop!

The kids, more characters! Excited about them, Rotflol Daddy Riddick? Can't help it, it makes me giggle.

Look forward to the next chapter,
Aurora

I've been reading for ever, but I don't think I've ever reviewed before. Sorry.
But I just wanted to let you know that your story is fantastic, the writing is superb, the plot is slendific, and the characters (esp. the OC) are perfectly inspired. I love how you write Riddick esp. he's not just some stupid senseless killing machine, and he is capable of feeling, and you write that.

So basically mui Kudos to you.

Aurora

This is great. You did an awesome job with Riddick. Bell's pretty awesome too. I'm gonna go ahead and give this a chance. She's still no Jack but she's definitely got some spunk. ;)

I love the part where Riddick tells her he wouldn't have needed a knife to kill her. (I'm up to chapter nine) I also found the part where she asked Riddick not to kill her funny.

I'm wondering what's going to happen to Jack, though. Will she and Riddick still have that same sort of bond they shared in the movies? (Yeah, I'm still a Jack fan at heart...)

For now I've got to get to bed but this has been a really great read. It's very creative and well thought out. I loved how you explained all the planetary stuff.

Once again, you're totally awesome. ;)

Peace out! :)

Hey I haven't seen an update in a while what's up?

Wicked migraine

WOOOOOHOOOOOO GO RIDDICK! KICK THEIR ASSES!

I'm glad that you've returned to this fic after a long absence. I'd have reviewed earlier, but was afraid that it might be a one or two chapter addition and then forgotten... not what I call a "return" to the story. I'm very interested in where you'll take the plot next. It certainly isn't where I anticipated at this point, but your idea is extrememly interesting. I do hope you'll continue updating often, and writing Bell as a strong female character (a quality I appreciate very much, judging by the novels in my library). Good luck with your writing!

moving right along i see. good. oh and kudos on the terminology.

Thanks for the acknowlegement. First off well done on Riddick. Few write him as well as you do taking him to extremes (too nice too mean) where you find a nice medium and hit his movie persona better then most. Second kudos on Bell. The hidden warrior/damsel in distress combination works well for this story and compliments Riddick's character. I will check daily and continue to review (though they probably wont be this long unless I notice something new to coment on). Good luck

oh this is just bloody wonderful!!!