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It is soooo good! I can't wait to see your next chapter! Please PLEASE email me when you get it up!

sorry i thought my email would show. it's akkirby@wichita.edu

I am soooo glad that this story isn't a "deadbeat author" fic! I like where you've gone with the plot and characters. They remain strong and neither is dependent on the movie(s). I look forward to the next chapter, especially Bell's reaction to learning about Riddick's promotion from the top of the underground food chain to the top of the political food chain. Likewise, I think it is interesting to consider how he will react to their child. I'm still unsure where the UDMC will play into things... they seem to be more important than the role already given (abducting Bell) but I have no idea what you're planning. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter(s)!

this story is friggin outstanding. keep up the good work.

Loving it so far!

Your depiction of Riddick is brilliant - I can imagine him saying all your lines, you've really captured his character!

So what happens next? I notice there've been no updates for a few months - I hope that doesn't mean there won't be! I want to know how he an Bell are going to be reunited, and what about his child???

More please! :)

Hmm...I'm a little confused here by the shift in the story--although I'm ecstatic that there is actually a plot here, and a damn good one too! You shift from Bell's POV before the movie, to Riddick's after, and there's little to connect the two. What happened to Bell and Ramsey and Jack and Kyra and the kid in the intervening time? I'm so confused, but it looks like you might be tying them together near the end of this last chapter. Keep it up, and I'll keep reading!
~b.d.

You are a gifted wrighter. I understand what you mean about it having to 'feel' right. I really like this story. I hope you continue with it.

Yay I am so happy that you updated although, i love this story. Whats going on with Bella ? where is the child? does she have any special abilities? If Jack and Kyra were two different people where the heck is Jack. So many questions that I am dying to have answered. Please update soo.!!!

this rocks so far. i really like it. and i love the chronicles of riddick -- i cannot really remember pitch black. I LOVE VIN DIESEL! lol

I was so happy to see an update to this! I LOVE this fic! Please keep up the great work!