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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I happen to like this story. However, as an author, I understand your pains. It takes me weeks to merely be satisfied with the idea that I can't write it any better. Not to say it cannot be done better, but just not in my hands. I'd like to inform you that this was done well and without cause for qualms. I am also completely new to the Riddick genre... so my opinions of his origins and potential are ignorant: all seems well to me! I urge you to continue, even if you think your chapters are below par; an artist is always their own worse critic. Remember: this is your story. You get to do what you want with it. No boundries. No limits. I look forward to more chapters. Seriously.
-Keely
-Keely
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as it appears we may never see TCoR 2 and 3, maybe you'll do the honour and write us a fitting end?
I'm not averse to a little begging, provided there's a return :-D
xxxevilgrinxxx
I'm not averse to a little begging, provided there's a return :-D
xxxevilgrinxxx
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, kinda random, but i'm sure this is all leading somewhere. I will be looking for the next chapter :D. Keep up the great work!!!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Love the slamdog bit I could really see Riddick doing that just to see her jump. It's great to see you working on this one agian.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good I wish you would continue, you got me hooked since the first chapter, You
captured the Riddick character well. I waited a long time for this new chapter.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, the 'what the hell do I do with this story NOW?" dilemna has you in it's grips, C.
well, for whatever the fuck it's worth, I like yer story.
as fer the TCoR stuff?
it's your world
if it doesn't fit with what you want, you don't have to add it.
I'm a Pitch Black girl, all the way, never much knew where to go with it, with TCoR, especially when i don't see any more sequels anytime soon.
If it gives you a fat head and makes you happy, i like yer writing just fine, as any look at my recommended reading list will attest to
take care
xxxevilgrinxxx
well, for whatever the fuck it's worth, I like yer story.
as fer the TCoR stuff?
it's your world
if it doesn't fit with what you want, you don't have to add it.
I'm a Pitch Black girl, all the way, never much knew where to go with it, with TCoR, especially when i don't see any more sequels anytime soon.
If it gives you a fat head and makes you happy, i like yer writing just fine, as any look at my recommended reading list will attest to
take care
xxxevilgrinxxx
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! Brilliant! Well set out and all that jazz. Fabity-abity-doo!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oof. on chapter 12.. .probably one of the single most funky sex scenes ever... just... wow.
Okay, back to reading.
Okay, back to reading.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, its now 3am and i'm sleepy. Update. :D
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just started this story, after reading a couple of your shorts. You have a great writing style, and I look forward to reading the rest of the story
xxxevilgrinxxx
xxxevilgrinxxx