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"He was like a poem, hard to read and understand, but still able to stop a person in their tracks by the simple beauty of it."

one hell of a nice way to put it, C.
I'm impressed
xxxevilgrinxxx

Shit. This has got to be one of the best Riddick stories I have ever read. I started reading this a long time back, and have just now found it again. I am so glad to see that you had updated. I beg of you to please update again soon. I NEED to know what happens next. That was one of the best cliff-hangers I've seen in a while. If you can, please e-mail me to tell me when you have updated. I cant wait. Keep up the great work!
-Rin

More,more please
I love this story!
Update soon

Interesting. I enjoy your style, not to mention the content. I'm heavily attracted to the fact you maintain Riddick's dark and stormy appeal and really do adore your OC, Bel. It's not "love and first sight," or anything incredibly romantic, but the love of two people who are lost in a world to which they don't exactly belong. I like how you include the jargon specific to the genre, sounding almost like it was swept from the movie itself. Also, I'm impressed with your ability to show the passage of time without the need for interruptions and notes. This is good! I look forward to reading more. I'll be watching. -Keely

Amazing! I love this story. Different take on PB from any others i've read. I love how you make Riddick human without making him too emotional or whimpy. I also like how Bell accepts him and doesn't turn into a love struck begging female. I'd love to see you write more like this and False Dawn!

OMG ... This if Awesome!! update soon please and let me know when you do. Much love from your fan=Me.

Wasn't sure I'd like it, but I got sucked in. Good stuff. I know the writing's hard sometimes, but I (and at least fifty others #grins#) would appreciate an update soon.

great story!!
update soon plz
and some more sex scenes,...not with the bot!
lol
Crystal

Please, please finish the story, I love the way you captured the Riddick characters
personality. I enjoy good writing and you show talent and imagination.

DAMN you're good! I love this story! Excitedly awaiting the next installment....