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Holy crap, this story is a jewel. Bella is a wonderful character, and that's not even close to an idle compliment. Nothing that I can think of makes her too perfect, or too annoying. You also seem to have gotten Riddick in pretty damn near perfect character. Now for my compliments on the best part - the sex. ^_^ Perfect. Too often I find myself reading stories where Riddick all but rapes a woman, and she's all, "I love it." It's disgusting. You did it beautifully, keeping Riddick Riddick, while not making him a dominant ass. You seem to have created a character that is a perfect compliment to his impossible personality. ^_^
I laughed so hard as both of them though about what the previous captain used Ramses for. So hard. ^_^ I do wish you had put in Riddick's "Beautiful," comment, but I honestly can't complain.
I'm very happy with how Bell delt with Riddick running off to crash himself on a Godforsaken ice planet, but Jack and Kyra upruptly running off made me sad... And now you have me on the edge of my seat wondering what happened to Bella and Riddick's kid. I cannot wait till your next update. You are amazing. Monty Python and the Holy Grail is amazing. This story is amazing. The amount of money I wouldn't give to have been Bella is amazing.

Say the word, and I'll go and review the other 18 chapters, but at the moment, I'll just leave you with me begging for you to continue.
~sam~

Loved it so much! I so happy you updated! ^_~ I got to see what happens next! Update soon!

soooooooooooooo happy to see an update! Awesome!!!!!

I don't mind waiting for it, cuz it's that good.....

I love the update. I want to know were Ramsey is? What happened to the baby she was carrying? What did she see to make her scream? I can't wait for and update.
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OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I twist in the plot! I thought I felt one comeing! ^_~ lol! I'm so happy your not ending it cause I love this fic and I want to see what happens! ^_~

O_OYes! You updated. I love this chapter. I had a gut feeling that Bell and Ram were eventually going to have sex. It kinda sounds like Ram is jealous of Riddick, and its kinda making me suspicious how he's acting now he finds out that Bell if furyan and so is her baby..O.o I hope he doesn't rat them out. That would really suck lol.
This is really original..I like how you added the little twist here in this chapter where we learn Bell knew Riddick from when they were children. I wonder if he remembers. I hope you elaborate this further in the future, because I find these little details you weave into your story really interesting and what makes it even better is that they're believable.
Im kinda disappointed that Riddick didn't come in during this chapter, but it was still progressive and eventful so Im happy :XD
I hope you update again soon, I was panicking there for awhile because it was around..two weeks I think? I dunno, it seemed that long lol. I thought you had stopped writing this story. Pleasseee update soon?-puppy eyes-

Hey!

Just finished your Story... What can I say, great writing! I really enjoyed reading this. *smirk*
I just wanted to ask if there's a sequel... or at least information what became of Bell and her unborn child. *grin*

Greetings, Targon

Shit...awesome story!!! Yupps, this is my favorite Pitch Black fanfic. Is this the last chapter?? Or is there more to come??Sequel?

Oh my god…you have to update this quick and soon. I’m about to burst. I need to know where this will all lead.