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for Worlds Of War

by Lasski

person Anonymous
schedule November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you updated this. Just when I had no hope this or Courtesan would be updated you did. Sometimes when someone has too many storylines going on you get lost and/or don't develop a feeling for them, but I haven't felt that way with your stories. I'm glad that Sarah is visiting her friends. But, like so many of the threads, you are leavings us hanging. Please continue to update.

You are a very good author. You offer an engaging storyline, complex politics within a short beginning w/out seeming forced, and character development. It helps that there is a background of some of these characters based on the movie so readers aren't overwhelmed with too many personalities early when the writer risks losing a reader when they aren't engaged.
person DarkFire
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Please keep writing.
person Ash
schedule September 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! KEEP WRITING! YOU ARE GREAT!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
person Blackrosephantom
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello Laski:
I am so glad that you updated your terrific tale. Wow. I didn't know that there was a talking horse head in the first Cinderella story. Keep up the good work, and take care.
person Talltree-san
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woo, another chappie thank you much! Glad to see Sarah is back...for the time being it maybe anyway :).
person BRP
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi:
Can you please update this sexy story? I...um...wish...to study more...of this..."NEXUS"...between Jareth and Sarah...yeah... Thank you.

person BRP
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
=Holds up a life-sized poster of Jareth in black=

Fake Jareth says, in a fake manly voice: You have 13 hours in which to update this sexy story...before I send Justin Bieber after you. Such a pity.

person Talltree-san
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally read all the chappies available so far and really like the story so far. Can't wait to read more of it!
person mel
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting and waiting and waiting for this story to keep going and so far there has been no updates...PLEASE UPDAtE SOON
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're driving your readers nuts! Please post another chapter. I keep checking everyday in the hope that you would have been kind enough to throw us (me) a bone. Cannot wait to see what happens next!