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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have been hanging out for like half a year for this story to be updated again...HURRY UP
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story. i have been puttin of on reading it beacuse the description sounded a bit like earth had been invaded by aliens, and im not big on alien storys, but im really glad i read this. it was nothing lyk wat i expected and im really glad.
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, so far. I'm looking forward to it's completion!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I feel kind of bad that I haven't reviewed yet but I was so enraptured by the story line that I didn't want to stop until now to tell you... This is a great story. I know its going to sound sappy but I was welling up and everything when I found out that Johnny loved her... See I would actually like that pairing but at the same time, I really love Sarah/ Jareth... Anyways, I just wanted to tell you that I highly enjoy reading this story
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, tis me again. I am really impressed with what you have here and very excited for what you have coming up. Your description of the sex in Chapter 11 was extrememly hot and you have a talent for scenes like that XD Take that as you will. I'm looking forward to reading you next chapter ^^
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you have updated this story. I hope you continue.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This should be made into a movie. Seriously. Love the action and adventure.
Your writing is simply delicious, in this story and your other. You've got a beautiful blend of imagery and detail in everything. Your plots are so carefully woven together, and your characters are incredibly fleshed out. Insofar Toby is my favorite, the ruthless Pirate King he is. No reference to PotC needed, really...
Also, "Let's have Mikey try it... he'll eat anything..." Very cleverly worked in.
Do update this soon... I am eager to know where this is going!
Your writing is simply delicious, in this story and your other. You've got a beautiful blend of imagery and detail in everything. Your plots are so carefully woven together, and your characters are incredibly fleshed out. Insofar Toby is my favorite, the ruthless Pirate King he is. No reference to PotC needed, really...
Also, "Let's have Mikey try it... he'll eat anything..." Very cleverly worked in.
Do update this soon... I am eager to know where this is going!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I like this chapter, and the raw force of it. It's not the 'Oh, my love!' crap a lot of writing is; it's very dark.
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love that you have posted an update to this series. Continue soon.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i looove this story! i cant even tell u how happy this update made me! i almost gave up on a lot of the stories here and now im so glad i didnt!