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for Worlds Of War

by Lasski

person oxcab
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like ^_^ up date soon ^_^
person Eryn
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm overjoyed to see you working on this agian, it always was my favorite from you. You had Toby at the beggining, will we be seeing more of him soon? Can't wait for the next chapter!
person rara
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh more! more! This is one of the best stories I've ever read! You have such talent! Plz update soon!
person Katie
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is honestly the best Labyrinth fanfiction I've ever read. And one of the better fanfictions in general. I cannot wait for the next update. Please make it be soon.
person Irene
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories,Labrynth or other wise,that I have read in a long time.
Please!!!!!!!!Write more.
person Minniemay
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoot for sci-fi/fantasy's! I really wish there was more for me to read. Such a cliff-hanger! (squirms) does Ludo call the rocks? More writing please Or I'll spontainiously combust. E-mail me about the beta. ;)
person Princess
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
Interesting plot and i'm glad Jareth and Sarah are now interacting. Does Jareth love Sarah? Is his ownly purpose to get Sarah back? Is he really interested in her world's problems? And how to these people all know Jareth?
I'm a shameless J/S girl so i hope they work something out.
person Good Apollo, I am Burning
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon.
person Keats
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is awesome! I started reading it on your yahoo groups page but I needed to read more!
Well done!
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate to think you are languishing in sorrow for lack of reviews, my dear, so here one is.

I loved the last chapter and I love this one. I am so pleased that Jareth is still the heavy handed bastard from the movie, even though he keeps having these moments of apparent softness. I wonder if the softness is real...and if it is, if he'll ever learn to stop saying stuff to piss Sarah off. Glad she came to her senses though.

I'm also kind of interested that you managed to include a couple of the canon characters like Hoggle and Ludo and Sir Didymus. Most Labyrinth fanfics don't bother with them, except perhaps in a passing mention.

I think this is probably the most unique Labyrinth story line I've ever read. I love it. Please don't stop writing.