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I am not good at reviewing at all and I can't say nothing interesting or useful right now. But I truly like your story, so now I simply had to say something. If you want reviews (and thoughtful ones at that), adultfanfiction.net is not the right place for that. Labyrinth fan fics rarely get many reviews here. But that doesn't mean that no one is reading those stories. Readers are lazy when it comes to reviewing in general (like me), but they are even more lazy here than on other sites. If you want to know whether people are reading your story, take a look at how many hits it has had instead. I see that 'Worlds of War' has quite many hits compared to most other Labyrinth stories. So, don't think those thoughts about how your story or chapter sucks, because it couldn't be further from the truth. In fact, your stories are of the best on this site.

I don't usually review things (I'm shy :::sheepish grin::: ), but I just wanted to let you know that I'm really liking this story and that the last chapter and this most recent one are really good. I can't wait to read more and your story is pretty much the reason that I tend to check the Labyrinth fanfic section daily in hopes of the off chance of another update. Keep up the awesome work!

Ahhh! I've been dying to find out where this story was going since last year! I'm so excited to see more chapters! Please post more....this is great.

The new chapter was great! Just a lot shorter than I'd like...

hello authoress! this is a very gripping and engaging tale, i rather like imagining jareth in all black.

as i was reading this story, i was envisioning some of the scenes taking place in 'underground seattle'. i have taken the liberty of looking up a couple sites for you as i'm not sure that you are aware of it's existance, as most people outside of seattle aren't either. the only reason i know is that in '78' i lived there for a short time, and when i wasn't smugglling drugs and contriband to my now-ex in jail, i had the pleasure of being able to sightsee. seattle is a beautiful and diverse city. i hope you enjoy the following: (just remove the spaces)

http : // en . wikipedia . org / wiki / Seattle _ Underground _ Tour

http : // w w w . historylink . org / essays / output . cfm ? file _ id = 3086

you are a very talented artist, painting worlds and people with your words, and with those words, you carry us to places only in your imagination... but when you withhold them we are plummited onto the sharp rocks of reality... slowly we crawl upright, our minds battered and bloody, we plead, we shout, "PLEASE FINISH THIS! please..."

thank you
ginny

MORE PLEASE....PRETTY PLEASE.....

It's so original and so well written.

It looks like a very well thought out story. I will also be keeping up with it so i am hoping you are planning on finishing it. Great job!

So glad to see another chapter on this story, I've been following Courtesan and love it but this is still my fav from you. It's such an unexpected twist for the story and the characters.

Yipee another chapter! I love this story and am very glad to see you working on it agian. I also saw your post about betas, I'd love to read for you if you'd like, just email me the chapters.

Hello, dahling! Just wanted to say i LOVE this fic. It's quite amazing and rather original, which is becoming more and more difficult to find these days, i'm afraid. I hope you post the next chapter soon!