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Holy crap please don't let her die! I have to say I've read every chapter so far and you've done a very good job in your writing. But please don't let her die, but you're the writer here and already have the plot planned out- I'm just here voicing my love for what you've written so far and well for some weird, twisted reason I want it to be Vader/Padme pairing, hehe.

Hey there! I loved the last two chapters. The way you used the changes in POV was really great, now we can see what is happening through not only Padmé's eyes, but Anakin/Vader, Luke, Leia and even Palpatine. And, of course, you complicate matters most for our heroes in each new chapter lol Alright, I know that it is too fluffy, but I would love to see Ani and Padmé together again in the bright side of the Force in the end. Would I be asking too much if you could send an email when you update your work? Write more and update soon, because that last clifhanger almost killed me, I really need to see what is going to happen lol

this makes for a great cliffhanger

Oh wow... I wasn't expecting that. Padme sacrificed herself to save Luke... wow I can't wait to see Vader's reaction if he finds out for the 2nd time that he killed his wife. I hope she isn't dead though!

Wow .. all I can say is Wow. I can't wait for the end ..

Wow,

interesting twist on the whole plot! Keep writing, I'm really curious to know how the story continues...

OH SHIT THE UPDATE WAS COOL NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PADME MUST NOT DIE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WAT WILL HAPPN?!?!?!?!??! OH JESUS CHRIST PLZ I BEG I BEG I BEG MERCY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the next chapter should be really good

Very good story! Lots of emotion and skating the line between AU and canon. You have me on edge and wanting to know more at the end of each chapter. Great job!

its a great story