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October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice work - a sad, appropriate story for this phase of the saga.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah ha, another fan of "The Emperor and the Assassin" ^_~ Nicely done, you created a good character ^_^
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now this is NOT a mediocre fic. Thanks for restoring my faith in this site. It's been a long time since a new fic was posted that I really enjoyed.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, simply lovely. You kept it dark and true to ROTS. I applaud you for not giving in and trying to soften the Jedi Temple massacre. I hope you contribute more quality stories to this site. Amidst the dreck and the slash, we need you.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good .. poignantly dark and forboding. Especially the choice of characters leaves no compunctions about the depth of Anakin's turn to evil. Very well done indeed.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep writing! i love this plot--its so original and interesting!!!! did it end with chapter 4? if so, aww. but if not, write write write! i cant wait for moooree
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! Your best work yet. Captivating. Not so fluffy it makes your teeth hurt, but nor is it so dark as to leave the reader feeling eviscerated. Nice touch with Siti making an attempt on his life - I had completely forgotten about the fruit knife by the time I got into chapter 4! The pacing was good, the grammar and syntax remained commendable ...
I must stop gushing before I sound like an overzealous fangirl ;) Good work.
I must stop gushing before I sound like an overzealous fangirl ;) Good work.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am crying just like in the scene in the movie. where the younglings think he is there to rescue them
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully dark story. I love fics that fit into the movie, that work so well they could be canon. You did a great job with the odd bits of backstory you layered in. Bravo.