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neat story! plz update!

Where's the update?! I NEED a new chapter! I demand some new quality fic to read! Have you no pity? ;-)

There is a saddening lack of good "Revenge of the Sith" fiction out there thus far; mostly wildly AU smut and random drivel (not necessarily referring to the other things on AFF, just fanfiction as a whole.) Therefore, it is a joy to come across something - such as your story - that is not only written correctly (good spelling, syntax, etc) but is also suspenseful and entertaining. Please, I beg of you, update soon!! I MUST find out how it ends!

*sigh* My only complaint is the chapters are too short! Keep it coming!! Oh, and you have assassin misspelled in title. Just thought you might want to know. It's missing an 's'. Damn double S's ;-)

Finally, a new story that is worth reading! Love the imagery and the feel of the entire piece. You've captured the mood wonderfully. The only thing I would change, and this is only because The Simpsons are so imbedded in my head, is when Anakin thinks 'Exellent' to himself. All I can hear is Mr. Burns voice and see him rubbing his hands together ;-) But in the grand scheme of things and compared to some of the other poorly researched and written stories out there, that's just a tiny personal thing LOL. Can't wait for more of this. Keep up the good work!

"Anakin understood why Obi-wan had wanted to come to the nursery. Not only was this probably the closest he’d been to a woman’s breast since he himself was weaned, but she touched you as well."

This line made me laugh out loud! Good job so far. Looking forward to the rest of it. Though I really hope you aren't going to have Anakin/Vader go all soft and let Siti get away. It would kind of take the dark out of the entire destruction of Jedi scenes in ROTS. But then, maybe that's what you're going for? I guess everyone deals in their own way. Either way, nice story.

Without giving away what I have in my head, I can assure you that I intend to keep Anakin dark. Just the way we like him :)