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April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Breaks my heart that Obi-Wan decided he had to be more strict and more distant from Anakin to save him from falling to the Dark side. So frustrated with the Jedi and their sociopathic ways.
Beautiful story exploring their bond across space and time. Love really does conquer all.
Beautiful story exploring their bond across space and time. Love really does conquer all.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo! The next chapter can't be the last! I love this story and I hate to see it end, although I am curious how you plan to wrap it up. Your amazing writing has cemented my newfound enjoyment of slash fics, and I am off to read everything else around here that you may have written. Don't worry about not having a beta too much; any errors there may have been weren't enough to distract me from the story, which IMO is all that really counts. Please update soon!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was.... I mean, that was really...
wow.
lina.
wow.
lina.
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are probably one of the most evil individuals I've ever heard of. I suppose you got a kick out of torturing your readers by ending the chapter that way? *laughs* Well then, hat's off to you. You've got me fidgeting in my seat here.
Anyway, on to the review: I really love the way you've described the conflict in Obi-wan. There's a perfect balance of anger and lust that you've given him and blends so well with his character. Post the next chapter soon!
Anyway, on to the review: I really love the way you've described the conflict in Obi-wan. There's a perfect balance of anger and lust that you've given him and blends so well with his character. Post the next chapter soon!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waiting for a few hours... ok ok.. I could do that... I think...
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NOOOOO I CAN'T!!!!!!! ARR
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NOOOOO I CAN'T!!!!!!! ARR
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if I have the luck or the misfortunate of reading this last chapter before the next one comes out. AHH!!!! I can't wait. Such suspense and cliffie. Nice fight scene. I wish it had lasted longer. I hope they fight some more. It's very intense between them.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mesah likes! Sorry, had to. Anywho, I really liked the idea of Ynin, even thought he was a little creepy with the whole blood thingy. And, um, yeah, keep up the good work! (Hope this feeds your little plot bunny)
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far. I'm on the edge of my seat. Great plot, and great way to tell it. Characterizatiosn are going great so far. Darth's angst and emotional turmoil is very palpable. Obiwan is great too. Can't wait for when they meet again! I wish they had in this episode. Give the next chapter as good a job as the rest of them have been.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow . . . WOW! *laughs maniacally* I am so glad that you decided to post this chapter finally! ^^ And omg, finally a little bit of Anakin's predicament is explained! Oooh. Arrgh, I need more. XDDDDDDD I'm so greedy! *slaps self* Anyway, please update soon . . . even if your beta's on vacation! =D