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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm still enjoying this. There are a few small errors; missing words and punctuation, nothing drastic. I hate nitpicking though, so I won't comb through the whole piece. I am kind of troubled by your closing notes. You give us previews (which is great!), but then you add "should anyone wish it". That makes me sad. You should write the story if you want. Don't wait for people to tell you to write more. There are readers, plenty of them, who don't like being made to feel like they have to say something in order to keep enjoying.
The council would sense all of this.. My own weakness, and selfishness at not accepting his death. To let myself, a Jedi for Force sake!, be dominated by a self-proclaimed Sith.. and fantasize that he was my master.
I loved that line. It sums up perfectly why this story is so kinky! :)
The council would sense all of this.. My own weakness, and selfishness at not accepting his death. To let myself, a Jedi for Force sake!, be dominated by a self-proclaimed Sith.. and fantasize that he was my master.
I loved that line. It sums up perfectly why this story is so kinky! :)
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! update again real soon! *laughs* you are doing an awesome job. i'm so glad i decided to check today and see if you updated. *grins* keep up the good work. and last time i check omitance was a word, or at least i thought it was, you just spelled it wrong, that's all. Well, i'm looking forward to the next part. *smiles* got to go. BYE-BYE!!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is my current favorite fic!! Please update it soon because I will be checking for the next chapter every day until it gets here!!!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... OMFG!!!! So good! SOOOOOO GOOOD! This is just... wow. WOW, WOW, WOOOOOOOOW! aleirhawlera!!!!! rwleirlerwer!!Aihfelir!!! AWjfasdlfhea! ASDFJKLADFJKL:! So much incoherency! XD Anyway, CONTINUE! :D
However, I am a bit confused with how Anakin is in the past. Is Anakin really all better and walking through the past and messing it up? Or... is he crazy? :P But, eh, I'm sure you will answer all these questions as you post more chapters! ^^ And besides, the smut banishes all these questions so I really shouldn't be asking/complaining! *slaps self*
*takes a deep breath* I LOVE YOU!!!! Please continue omfg.
However, I am a bit confused with how Anakin is in the past. Is Anakin really all better and walking through the past and messing it up? Or... is he crazy? :P But, eh, I'm sure you will answer all these questions as you post more chapters! ^^ And besides, the smut banishes all these questions so I really shouldn't be asking/complaining! *slaps self*
*takes a deep breath* I LOVE YOU!!!! Please continue omfg.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story, well written. Looking forward to the next chapter! :-)
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good work can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I regret not having gotten around to this chapter sooner. Well written smut, huzzah!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, uh, yeah. I'm waiting for some more. I'd like to read the Obi-Wan POV to see what it was that led him to allow the forced (in the beginning) sex.
Waiting.... Waiting....
Waiting.... Waiting....
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhh! * Raises hand*
I very much desire for this fic to continue!
*Makes it into a wish list*
1) I also want more smut, of a more consensual and kinky way!
Please continue!
I very much desire for this fic to continue!
*Makes it into a wish list*
1) I also want more smut, of a more consensual and kinky way!
Please continue!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so haunting and tragic and. . . .wonderful. The emotion is so powerful! I read your story this morning and I've been thinking about it all day. Please write more. It's truly intriguing. . . You're a much better writer than a ton of other SW fan fiction-ers out there. Kudos to you. ;)