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for The Padawan Screamed

by danslenfer

person Rose
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you're consciously trying to compromise the slash community with blatant children pornography, you're on your best way.
person let\'s just say.. anonymous
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The content's not really my cup'o tea.. But it's surprisingly well written.
You seem to have a pretty good grasp of the Star Wars universe, and there's little to complain about when it comes to vocabulary, or grammar.
Have you ever considered writing a story with characters of consensual age?
person \"nemo\"
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is like that dude who displayed pickled animal fetuses and called it art (what is his name again?). Sheer shock value to make the jaded masses feel something...anything, even horror.
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should probably kill yourself.
person MistressD
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erm, sick, but well-written. If you were to write a story about two adult characters, *cough*YayforAnakin/Obi-Wan*cough* I would definitely read it! ^^