AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for A Pirates Passion

by Shelle

person Angel
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad!!! Poor them. I can't believe Maddy died *tear*
person michelle
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished reading your story "A Pirates Passion" and I must say it was definately one of the best stories I have read so far. I agree with Depp.me above that this is a hard one to see end. The couple had been through a lot......so it was nice to see them finally together again all happy and planning their wedding. Everything was turning out wonderfully that I knew something had to happen. It was too good to be true. But I must say how you ended it totally caught me off guard. I was so sad I had tears in my eyes. But how the last chapter played out with Grandpa Jack, made it a little easier to accept. I forgot to mention in the previous review about the gold chain with Madelines family crest on it.....Eagle and a Sparrow. Very fitting and sweet. Thanks for the great adventures....I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Thanks again.
person Depp.Me
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hard to see this one end, such a beautiful story - one I'll remember. Thank you for your gifted words.
person michelle
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update they were entertaining as usual. I loved it when they trick Elizabeth. I could just see her all in a tizzy....very funny. If I were JJ I would be terrified wondering what Jack was going to do to us. I'm sure they will behave from now on. It was very sweet when Jack was being so nice to the little girl and thinking of his own daughter. Very heartfelt. Also it was nice that JJ stuck up for the little sister. Does that mean something? I guess I will just have to wait and see. Plus you saved the best for last. The last words spoken "Love me Jack." Loved it......and ready for more.
person michelle
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I stayed up all night to read "A Pirates Love and A Pirates Passion" very enjoyable reading it was. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can, I hate having to wait, it drives me crazy. It's just so nice being able to stay up all night and read a story from beginning to end with no interruptions but thats life......I shall wait patiently and check everyday.
person depp.me
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank ye kindly for the updates! Ye got me heart racin again....
person Angel
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its BACK!!!!! YAY
person Angel
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeease update! This story was so great!
person DarkTigress
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! please keep it up!!
person Vagabond
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More updates....please! I need my fix...