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by Monchy

person Olivia
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was poetry. Pure poetry. Absolutely beautiful. You have a beautiful reading style, smooth and flowing. I love it. Excellent job. I'd love to hear more from you, but it just seems like this story is so perfect just the way you have it. Excellent job.
person pretty white raven
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make sure you put up a disclaimer. it's a wonderful story, however the repitition of "I hate you" became a little out of touch with the story. it seemed like it was in the wrong places at times. awesome, though. awesome awesome awesome. keep up the good work.