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This story is so awesome!! I am hooked to it so I must read more!! Keep up the good work!! And please, more Obi/Ani smut!!

Great chapter I am glad you pretty much skipped the 8 months. And I am glad nothing really happened to them during those 8 months except that little flying guy annoying everyone. Even Obi-wan wants to kill him and is upset that Ani is first in line.. LOL Keep writing this is good

Great chapter. I do have a question I thought Count Dooku was killed during the mission to rescue the Chanceller.... before Luke & Leia were born? Because if Dooku was still alive I didn't think the Sith would be looking for an apprentance (sp?) because there are only always 2... master & apperentance (sp?) So how could Dooku only been killed six months ago? Anyway enjoyed the chappie and glad to see Obi-wan and Ani got to see a bit of action but I hope Ani doesn't over do it and get too tired or something. Keep writing.

As to my question about the Count I did go back and read the first chapters again and I guess the Chancellor being "kidnapped" didn't happen? Unless it happened before this story started... because you started about the time Ani was put on the Council and the mission to "save" the chancellor happened before that. Sorry for the questions I am not totally awake right now I will be back later and read things again. I am confusing myself. Still enjoying the story so don't stop.

wonderful chapter. The reunion with Ani's mother was sweet. So Qui-gon and Obi-wan were going to marry/bond? It sounded like that even though they were both Jedi that it was forbidden or did I read it wrong? Don't worry about it too much it isn't really that important anyway. Did Ani know about Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan? It wasn't mentioned before I am just being curious. This is such a great story that I get "involved" and then I start asking questions and stuff. Don't really worry about answering if you don't want I am sure most of my questions will be answered as the story progresses. I hope they are able to free Shimi without killing her owner. It would be great if she could spend time with her grandkids. She deserves that after being seperated from her son for so long. I am glad you didn't have her die like they did in the movies. Keep writing I look forward to the next update.

*whew fans self* this last chappie... was hot. not I want to be in a spaceship with those 2 do you think they would let me watch and participate? This is such a cool story and you are doing a great job writing this. I look forward to the next upate.

Your lastest chapter was hot...wow! Let me just tell you which Im sure you've heard alot lately...I wait with bated breath for every chapter you post. I can't wait to read what happens next although I'm sure some angst is coming, poor anakin having four babies...ow! Please keep writing and the chapter where Padme died and told Anakin and Obi Wan to go ahead and love and live you made me cry! I adore any author's ability to make me feel the emotions
of the chararacters oh and the sex was pretty hot too.

toodles

I read all 14 chapters today and I am relly happy I found this story. I like the relationship that is developing between Ani and Obi Wan. I look forward to reading future installments and can't wait to see where you are going with the story.

Hey this is a great story. A friend of mine suggested it to me. So I had to check it out. Its great. I was a bit surprised at the four kids but hey you have plans for them so keep writing. One thing while I like the idea of Obi-wan & Anakin having this "bond thingy" please don't get too carried away with them sending each other images, etc to me it seems to take a bit away from the story. I like that they can feel each other and can hear some thoughts if they are not careful but the images and stuff seems a bit much to me. I know you are trying to maybe put some fun into the story and that is great I guess it just isn't my thing. Still it is a great story and I am going to continue to read I am not flaming you just stating my opinion. Its a great story and I look forward to reading more.... and any sequel you may write you did mention those too. Again awesome story.

Nice update. This is a very intersting story. I am intrigued about you plans for the "four" I figured you had a reason for Anakin having four kids besides the twins. Keep writing.