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LOL.... great chapter. I can just see and hear Obi-wan grumbling through the link and him thinking/scolding Anakin. Keep writing you are doing great.

Aww, poor Ani! It's hard enough for a girl to have quadruplets, just think of what Ani will have to go through. And OBI-WAN will be the step-father of two and the father of four at fourty-something...talk about a mid-life crisis. But I know what you're doing...you're going to have the two repopulate the Jedi...I'd like to see you try!! Are the baby's names going to be like all 'L's or some such thing? Anyways, keep going.

I started reading this story a little while ago and I was really getting into it, but to be honest I'm not too keen on the quadruplets plotline. It seems a bit over the top and I think it distracts from Obi Wan's and Anakin's relationship, and their special union. Anyway, just my two cents worth.

haha, anakin is so in for it! i can't wait for the next chapter!

Well this is interesting. But four? And how will they explain this to the council especially about Obi-wan and Anakin being together. Keep writing update soon

FOUR KIDS! WOW! That is DEFINITELY going to be a handful! Never say that coming. Though I was wondering who was going to get pregnant...with how Anakin came to being, anything was possible. And I really like how ya added that bit over the bound disappearing and reappearing. That really added more to the story and connected the chapters better.

I was wondering though...Anakin was so angry over Padme's death when she died...how did he get over that anger. I was almost expecting him to go hunt down the Sith in the next chapter! So is the Sith going to make another appearance? They've been gone for quite a while now.

Great job! Can't wait for the next update!

This is one of the best fics I've been following so far. It's so full of feeling, emotions...and as I said before, I love AUs in which Ani doesn't turn...if only it had been like that in the movie... *sigh* Your Ani is so noble, so wonderful. I can't wait to read more. I loved this last chapter with him and Obi making love. Please give us more of the hotness! ^__^

Wow! This is really good! I'm really enjoying this story line. I've always wondered how things could've been if Ani hadn't fallen to the dark side. The movie showed just how powerful a team Obiwan and Anikin could be.

So far I've only had problems with your very, very long sentences (run on sentences - when there should be several sentences instead of just one). The grammar has made me cringe, but that is all.

I am wondering though...is Obiwan still blocking his emotions from Ani? When he learned the truth, you showed that Ani was upset over it. Did he ever get the openness back? It was never clear if he did or when he did. Could you clarify that maybe?

Keep up the great work! I'm an truly loving this story and can't wait for the next update!

It's so sad! -dabs eyes with a hankie-

how sweet! i can't wait for the next chapter!