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Please, please, pretty please with sugar on top won't you come back and update? You've been gone for far to long!

This is one of the best and well written fanfics I've read.
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease say you're going to add to it!
AND SOON!!!

You are going to update this one soon right? C’mon you’re killing us! ;~)

Give us an update, go on, please?

It was good, but I felt that because of it's length, it lacked the same compelling factors as Succumb & The End Justifies The Means. Perhaps a first chapter to a longer story? I do love this author, though. I think she's really talented.

Awesome Kelly, you do it again! Would love to see you finish this. Veyr provocative imagery, especially the drunk seduction.

Excellent, as always, Pagan! You have such a way of bringing your readers right into the story and making us feel like we're actually there witnessing they whole thing going on between Anakin and Padme. I love the dark, focused tendencies your Anakin has and the way Padme can NOT put him off, no matter how 'senatorial' she may try to act. I also am a fan of your descriptions. The whole story is spellbinding and I can't wait to read more!

I love how you potray Anakin and Padme, and I love your fanfictions. They're very original and dark. I always did like dark (erotica) fics. And how by each chapter, it gets much better, unlike some which goes down the drain.

About Anakin and Padme's relationship in this, I love it! It's very in character. In AOTC we can see how Padme was in control, but in ROTS it seemed that the roles became reverse. It was very different, and I can see that you've noticed that. (Remember how Anakin told Padme, he'd do anything she asked in Aotc, but in Rots when she asked him to talk to the Chancellor about letting diplomacy resume, he told her not to ask him that, that he wouldn't.) Good-no Excellent job! It's marvelous, and please continue.

Great Start, can't wait for the update.

hmm very hot cant wait to see more