rate_review Reviews

Excellent! Superbly written, and I can't wait for the next chapter - soon I hope?

i love all ur stories. please update soon!

OMG im dissapointed that you ended it there.....please update soon, i will be looking foward to it, I love Anakin, he is perfect...you portrayed him very well. Thanks.

Yay! New pagan stories about dark sexy anakin and his padme. I love your writing as you know well.

Man u good! Keep at it, will be patient for moore ^^'!

Where's the next chapter??? :) Perfection again! You have these characters down cold!

Your work is always exquisite, exciting and very sexy. You've spent a great deal of time getting to know these characters and it shows. If I may offer one small critique on the technical side: The two openening sentences in the first paragraph are both quite long. I had to do a double take on that paragraph, just like many times in German lit class (boy, do they love long sentences!). I'm by no means suggesting you should dumb down your work. Unlike Stephen King, I think one should never patronize one's readers, but I must admit that the paragraph caught me off balance. I am, of course, eager to read the next part!

Aduxie :)

Perfect. As always, you grasp Anakin's character beautifully and I like him better every story! Please update ASAP!!