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for In Their Element

by Dhvana

person SmutSlut
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pure art and it was riveting. And yes, I feel the need to use the word "riveting". The characters are played out so damn well, it was mind-bottling and I loved every minute of it. ^^
person Sed
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is agonizingly well written. I don't think I was breathing when Crane took the key card from Bruce. Explaining it isn't enough, I really just cannot tell you how much I love this story.
person Shan
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this so much that now I'm running late because I couldn't stop reading it!
person Bobby
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tightness! That was an awesome story. I'm impressed. It was...effective...lol.
person Rae
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Bruce. His name was like a kiss on those lips, leaving them slightly parted, an invitation for his tongue to slip between them. He was definitely coming, and soon, if he had anything to say about it." -That is the best sexual tension paragraph I've ever read. Rock on!
person Chi
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful!
person Minui
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, now that's a nice story - finger licking good! :9
person aLexis
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved it, that was my second time readin it, yum, could you write another Crane/Bruce one! Your very good
person DarlingTeapot
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, yeah, this was too fucking hot to be just a one-chapter story. write more, damnit!
person sarren
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool. I loved the dialogue at the club, and also, icecubes!