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one of the best xanato fan fiction stories. I am glad I stumble upon the gem! I love xan when he is not portrayed as a true evil jedi. I think xan was just a grey jedi when the order and the order did not try to understand.

Yes! I came here not expecting to see an update and was very pleasantly surprised.

My! What a volitile relationship these two have. I'm glad Obi asserted himself a bit here and Xan is aware that Obi is not a little puppet he can just order around.

I'll be interested to see how you handle the rest of this and Obi's choice in leaving the Jedi. I don't see Obi as lying, so i'm sure he's not out to just trick Xan.

Great post, can't wait for more.

--shan

I'm not sure whether I trust Obi-Wan completely. Is Xan so convinced of Obi's love that he's willing to contact the Jedi and give Obi-Wan an opportunity to break free? I'm very curious where you're going with this. I'm also very happy to see an update, by the way. I know you have other fics going on and I'm glad to see this one is still on your mind.

Not much for small talk are ya? That's okay, I guess.

**sigh** So we're back to settle down and wait mode are we? Bummer.

This is too good not to finish, and most authors I know hate to leave a fic unfinished - so i'm going to trust that you'll get back to this. I'll be back periodically to check.

--shan

I rather like this pairing! Unorthodox, yes, but ineteresting! Do continue!

Well, i'd *almost* given up hope on this fic!

I just happened to be reading the latest 'Cure' update and saw a recent review from you. And I thought.....hmmmm, I wonder....

So I popped on over and - Yes!! I was absolutely thrilled.

Of course you will finish this - never doubted you for a moment, okay, well yes I did - but after a 3 month absense I sense your not back to torture us with one more tantalizing chapter only to leave us hanging completely.

So - Welcome back! I'm not going to get pushy and ask for more NOW - since you've just returned :) But another chapter or two and things could change ;-)

--shan

I'm so glad you've continued this! Left us with a cliffy, but I'm hoping that's a sign that you plan to continue.

You are the God of Star Wars slash. *pants* Gawd. I've read this entire thing, like four or five times and it only gets better. I like the relationship you're created between Xanatos and Obi. It plays off facets in their personalities that would be involved in this relationship so it's very believeable. Enough of that, the loves scenes and the plot behind them are AWESOME, AMAZING and oh so glorious in the goodness that is your slash scenes.
As for suggestions, I hope you continue and I don't care how. I'd like to know what happened to Qui-Gon and Obi Wan when they first got separated but it isn't necessary. And now, the standard in all reviews, please continue!
Hugs slash author of amazing talent and runs away to work...

Love your story so far, I gotta say I wouldn't mind being in Obi's place.

I have to agree with Shanobi.... I come every day, and nothing... now I´m just sad :____________:

Are you going to sumit new chapters ever again???? Pleaseeee, don´t make me beg!!! (wait, that didn´t sound good... what the hell, I WANT NEW CHAPTERS).... *waving my hand in front of you* "You will update this fic now" .... sorry, that´s my anxiety speaking...

Anyway, leaving the madness... UPDATE SOON!! ^____^