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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good you updated, this was a good chapter. I was half expecting Plo Koon to do a dramatic jedi entarnce on them...anyways very enjoyable so please keep writing
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is really good, it's hard to find a plot based fic like this. I really enjoed the whole thing and can't wait for more. The sex scene was good and tied in well with the plot, I hope you update soon
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, very interesting chapter
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pwp would have been better hint hint
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter, you don't have to worry.
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done!
I havent seen many fics about Aayla (one other to be precise), so its good to see her getting some attention.
And I agree with Phantom, a long story is better than a quick PWP.
Good writing so far! Keep it up ^.^
I havent seen many fics about Aayla (one other to be precise), so its good to see her getting some attention.
And I agree with Phantom, a long story is better than a quick PWP.
Good writing so far! Keep it up ^.^
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, that was hot...
Aayla is really naughty! Leaving poor Obi-wan like that... mwahahahah!!
keep writing, please.
Aayla is really naughty! Leaving poor Obi-wan like that... mwahahahah!!
keep writing, please.
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HURRY UP! bring on the SEX!!
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you did well with that chapter though it would have been nice to have had obi return the favor maybe next chap anyway I don’t now why every one is worried there sex chapters aren’t good chances are if you like though sound of something others will too
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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