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person mary
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this alternate universe. Great story, thank you for writing.
person Alannah
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2 questions:



1) What is the relevance of "Now I Lay Me Down to Sleep" (by the way, "to" should be capitalized...)? I don't understand what it has to do with the story. I'm not trying to be rude, I'm just curious.



2) Shall I mark this under the category of abandoned fics? Because it's been a while since you said you were going to "revamp" it, and it's been even longer since you said you were going to post the last chapter. You should at least post an update so all your readers know what the hell happened to this story!

person JayCee
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!

Great update! Very tender!

So one more chapter huh?

hhhmmmmm... i'm both happy and sad... ggrrrrr
person jead
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's a lovely story, and i'm hooked
person Haden
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this latest chapter was good for what it was, though I must admit I was more than a little dissapointed that Vader fell in love with the girl. I was hoping that would be avoided in this story. I don't really like reading storied where Anakin or Vader falls in love with someone other than Padme. I am just a fan of that particular pairing. However, I think you did a wonderful job with progressing the relationship. It was never hurried or forced, and I applaud you for waiting nearly till the end for Vader to reveal his true feelings. In my mind though... Anakin will always end up with Padme.



P.S. I'm hoping for a sad ending ;-)

person doloris
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY HE SAID IT, FINALLY HE SAID IT, FINALLY HE SAID IT!!! I knew it for a long time he loves Ree.
Keep up the good work!!! I love it!!
person Gem
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...loved this chapter! So tender and sweet. I'm glad Anakin told her he loved her.
person NaughtyJedi
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Vader/Anakin will always love Padme. However, even when you deeply love someone, when they are dead I think it is only natural to find love again. It won't be the same, and that new love does not replace the one you lost, but you can love again. Will he ever feel the same way about Ree that he did Padme? No. But he does love her, in a way that is different from what he felt for Padme. I would hate to think that if I lost my husband I would NEVER, EVER find someone to love again. And I think Padme would want him to have someone in his life. I hope so.
person doloris
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Answer this. WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!!! I've been waiting a month and a half for you to post Ch 21. I know
you are reworking the WHOLE STORY, but can we at least read the last chapter?
person freshloaf
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, please post soon! We've been waiting so long!!!