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schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you all so very much! Anakin is still very hot (not as in smoking and charred!) in this fic. He still looks gorgeous...

This is a new genre for me, so your kind words are very much appreciated.
person ivorycoral
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent secodn chapter! One thing I admire about your wriitng is that you're not afraid to be blunt with details, there's been too much spineless writing lately. I agree witht hte other reviewers up to this point on everything they said. Take what they say to heart and keep writing good stuff like this. I dare say we all want to know what sill happen to Samri. Nice job!
person Roxy
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vader's my fav character, esp. when he still has Hayden Christensen's gorgeous looks! i love this story so far. i can't wait to read more, so update as soon as you can!
~Roxy~
person jeannie
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. So Vader wasn't scarred then? Great story though and hot. He wanted a girl that resembled Padme. Awesome.
person xtina
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haunting and beautiful. Please update soon!
person ivorycoral
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter, you have your hook into the story. The hook is always the difficult part but you got it. So now I'm curious as to what else will happen. I like how you've given everyone a name, a description, a place in this story, and at the same time not over-done everything. That's also tough to do. Keep going, I want to read more of this as soon as possible.
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses
person jeannie
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good start! Update please!