rate_review Reviews

Brilliant story! You're a wonderful writer!

That was absolutely the best slash I've ever read. And I'm a very, very pick reader. In fact, it takes a lot to get me to leave a review. My policy tends to be "if you don't have anything nice to say..."

However, I've got nothing but nice things to say about your fick. So many others out their paint Richard to not only uncaring in his behavior but uncaring as if he's incapable of it. And usually Justin is written as a clever, shy, sociopath. Again, as if he's incapable of feeling emotion. You're story portrayed Richard as being capable of love and Justin of receiving it. It was just beautiful while at the same time seeming entirely true to their characters.

The love scene was written excellently. Seriously, I'm saving this page under 'my favorites'. From the things they muttered and screamed and whispered to one another, to Richard taking such great care to make Justin's first time so perfect. It was great. Really makes it depressingly and frustratingly obvious what's lacking from both mainstream and pornograhpic love scenes.

There are no words to describe just how incredible this story was. It was so, so perfect. Thank you. I loved the last line, by the way.

I'm review bombing you again. (insert what i wrote last time) ...something about you rocking. Still true!

Happy writing!

Another excellent fic! Definately very hot. Great job!