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by Apythia

schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please I would like to read more, Please update soon.
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I knew they still loved each other.

I have to say, though, that I don't think Harry ever actually slept with Mia. I think he came very close, giving her that necklace and all. But the reaction that he had at the kids' Christmas Pageant tells me that he became completely aware that what he had done was so very wrong; it wasn't a harmless token. It meant something to Mia, and something to Karen, and he had been unfaithful to her by that one simple act.

Anywho, good little fic, and I liked Karen's spunk at the end!

~The Amazing Enthusiasto~
person Marlina
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you :) I love you! It'll be great if you continue this..
person LadyRaye
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. I so wish that you had continued it but it's awesome on it's own. Great job.
person mysticsong
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is quite good.
person 8inchCaliper
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh nice! I really liked the Harry/Karen sections of this film (and not just because I'm a big ol Alan fan *cough*) - but very nicely done! Um...one thing, though....did Harry actually sleep with his secretary or did he just give her a neclace? I was never really clear on that...
person luna lupin
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a good start but lets get now to business and bit of a lemon
person Lilac Beauty
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. :)