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Thanks for the lovely replies. I'm nervous about the detour but I think it will make for some interesting reading. I figure things can't be that easy for our stubborn boys. Plus to be honest, I'm enjoying this Bruck and want to explore him a little further. Just hope you all enjoy the journey as well. :)

I'm loving this story! Although you write the sex scenes amazingly well, it's the love story that has me hooked.

I was touched that Bruk loves Obi so much that he's willing to tell Xan how to make Obi stay. Poor Xan... :-(

I can't wait to see how this all turns out!

:O

Well - Now i'm curious, and ever so slightly nervous.

Obi's proclomation was a surprise, to say the least. I liked that he caught Xan off guard though.

I sense there is still much to work out between Obi and Qui, yet I can't help but think Obi may still be testing Xan, to see if Xan will really let him go.

Those boys are just so stubborn. Obi doesn't want to admit his love and Xan doesn't want to ask him to stay. Lovely angst :)

The shower scene was both hot and (bitter)sweet. It really did seem like a good bye on Obi's part. Poor Xan, climbing into bed all hearbroken with a bottle - I so wanted to climb right in with him and comfort him ;)

Okay - so you took a little turn/detour with this. I don't mind at all when the journey is as enjoyable as this fic has turned out to be - as long as we still remember that the destination is still ultimately Xan/Obi and some happily ever after with great sex along the way ;-)

Can't wait to see where you take them next! Soon?

--shan

very sweet, but i'm a little confused, who does Obi-Wan love? Xanatos or Bruck? oh well, 'tis a very good story!

Thanks Lina and Shan. :) The feedback helps a lot. So....this story went and took an unexpected turn on me. Don't ask why. I just hope this new direction ends up working. [face_nervous]

:P I can't keep up with all this men kissing!! hehe Ok, that's a lie. Yes I can. :)

Bruck is sweet, but I feel bad for Xan and Obi-Wan. This next chapter will either be Xan kicking the crap out of them or one big orgy :D
hihi just kidding.

Love the story, keep it up! And thanks.
lina.

Uh-Oh! This is not going to be pretty, is it?

I could just imagine Xan's tone of voice in my head, it doesn't bode well for Obi-Wan at all - or any of them actually.

Now you've got me all tense and nervous! What's Xan going to do? I'm breathless with anticipation - seriously. I'll be back daily until you post again.

Nice dialogue there at the end btw ;-)

--shan

Wow...

I love this Xanathos :) wow...
lina

Okay - so it wasn't the next day, but it was quick enough as there was a new chapter waiting the next time I managed to make it back here ;)

Lovely transitional chapter, and does serve to show that edge that Xan still has. Good time to show it - as his affections for Obi did somewhat soften his image. It's good to know that someone can penetrate his heart, but it was also nice to have that reminder that Xan is a fallen Jedi and is not prone to the same rules and ethics that bind Qui and Bruck. He's a bad boy - and all the sweeter and more appealing for it ;-)

You do a great job writing him, so cold on the surface but has obvious vulnerability when it comes to Obi. I very much enjoyed his thoughts during this post. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work, girl!

--shan

Shan- Not quite the next day. lol I decided I needed to remind myself that Xan was a bad boy. Enjoy!