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Wow - I swear, you just get better and better with each chapter. This new found connection between Obi and Bruck is so good, and done so well. I just loved the last line, Bruck so touched by the way Obi was looking at him - with respect and trust. I just wanted to say, "Awwwwwww...." It was quite sweet - and that's not a word I ususally associate with our Mr. Chun :D

And Bruck's observations were very enlightening. I have to wonder if they'll actually have an impact. I hope so, though Obi seems to be his worst enemy in this little(not so) fic of yours.

Oh - and what a tease with the opening! Great scene, but I see why it had to be a dream. Can't wait for more! You're on a roll - I half expect to come back here tomorrow and see another chapter ;-)

--shan

I must say that this was a very satisfying chapter. Obi-Wan is slowly coming to realize what he could lose and is wondering if his revenge is really worth it.

I loved the beach scene - nice imagery. And also liked that he went to Bruck for comfort. I sense Xan is in a torment all of his own, but this tough love approach is exactly what Obi-Wan needed I think.

The final scene with Bruck and Obi was very nice. Bruck's thought process was very realistic and in character for how you've portrayed him so far. However, the fact that he didn't act on it and truly thought of Obi's best interest was so 'evolved' of him and shows his true Jedi nature. I found myself happy for him that he gets to have this night with Obi in his arms.

Now I have to wonder if Xan is going to come across this and get all hurt and there will be more misunderstandings and emotional turmoil. . . I'm torn as to whether or not that would be a good thing or not ;)

Wonderful - i'm lovin every chapter, Adair.

--shan

You're so sweet Shan. :) I need to drop you a note about that other site and the poor abandoned story sitting there. :( As for this one, the boys have some tough times ahead. For anyone who may be wondering, chapter 21 has some sex in it. Sort of. lol

Durnar- Thanks! I agree the pairing is all too rare. It’s hard finding enough good Xan/Obi fics. So thrilled you’re enjoying.

Anon- The conversation won’t be too bad but it may lead to other things.

Shan- Hi dear. I’m pleased that the relationships are making sense and clear. I actually have two posts done and seem to be moving well as far as writing. Hope I can keep ya coming back.

**Once. A simple word and yet it had the power to cause indescribable pain.**

Aint that the truth. Poor Qui, Poor Xan - but most of all, poor Obi! What in the blazes is Xan up to? That last part sure sounded a lot like he was ready to give up on our Obi. And I know that you just wouldn't do that to me. You're making me nervous, but i'm going to trust you a while longer.

The kiss between Qui and Xan was a nice touch. A final token to remember for Qui - and an unmistakable realization for Xan. I really wasn't expecting Obi to walk in - though I should have I guess ;)

What happens next will be pivitol for my favorite Jedi. Can't wait to see what you've got planned for the sexy duo.

Great writing - and thanks so much for the quick and regular updates. I'd glare at some others for not doing the same, but they're not here to notice ;) Later.

--shan

Again, it must be said how superbly you are handling the emotions of all the involved characters. I love that I am aware of what they are all feeling at all times - and why. This is a very complex situation and circumstance - and you are doing such a good job and it is showing in your character interactions.

Whether he knows it or not - Obi-Wan has got the support of all three to help him through his hurt and anger. Let's hope he takes advantage of it.

Very much looking forward to the conversation between Xan and Qui. Hope to see more soon.

--shan

Yikes!!
what a dreadful conversation this will be!! ARG! I can't wait!! Arg!!!

:)
Lina.

Hoo... O_o .This is exellent! We want more,we want more! I have searched long time good Xanatos/Obi-Wan fic and finally found it.The pairing seems to be rather rare... I love the way you write them and that this have something else than only mindless sex. When we can wait for more? Well damn good work *applaud*. =)

Absolutely wonderful, Adair!

I've said it before, but it must be said again. I just love the dynamics here of all the characters and how you are handling them. The emotions of each are displayed so wonderfully - there is never any doubt as to how each of them are feeling, and why.

This last part with Obi struggling in Xan's arms and the tenderness of his kiss - even while being hurt and betrayed himself was so wonderfully done. I loved it.

You are such a gifted author. Did I tell you I miss reading your work? I know I did. Of course that was before you directed me to this wonderful gem.

I anxiously await more my friend. Don't you dare tell me this is drawing to an end - I could read this endlessly :)

--shan

Hi Shan. Glad you're enjoying this story still. I'm having fun writing it. I hope I can bring these four to some type of satisfactory resolution. Although this version of Obi is being a very bad boy and I think I need to explore his actions and reactions a bit more. lol Thanks for reading doll.