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**Qui-Gon Jinn was the past. Obi-Wan Kenobi was the future**

I found this line especially enjoyable. There is absolutely no doubt now as to where Xan's heart lies. He knows it, we know it - and Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are soon to realize it.

Lovely confrontation, I liked the obvious chemistry that still pulses between the two.

You're handling all the emotions in this very well. Jinn is obviously torn and is not the cold bastard that is sometimes painted. He made a mistake that he tried to correct - only he was too late.

I'm looking forward to how things progress for Obi-Wan. He's going to have alot to deal with emotionally. Thank goodness Xan is there for him- and I suspect Qui and Bruck will be factors in helping him to heal also. It's going to be a challenge to write (atleast it would be for me :D) However, I have complete faith in you and am looking forward to each and every post to come. Great writing - great fic!

--shan

Loved every sinlge line in this post, Adair.

Wonderfully angsty and heartfelt interactions! The tender kiss Xan gave Obi, Obi's reactions to Bruck's words and his request - all very well done.

Poor Obi! Having to go through what he did when he left M/D. No wonder he is so upset. I'm sure just hearing that is going to tear Qui up. It's going to be really hard, but I hope he can put it behind him and accept what Xan is offering him.

Next few parts should be interesting. Love how you've stayed true to all the characters but have really made them your own. Great writing.

Can't wait for more!

--shan

That last line was very telling - I love it! Wonderfully done, Adair. I thought it was great that even with the drugs Bruck was given that he still had the mindset to make the decision himself - and that Obi and Xan gave him that opportunity.

It was also very touching that Obi didn't swallow Bruck's release - saving that as an act reserved for Xan alone.

I'd say Bruck will wake up in the morning very willingly debauched :D If they actually get any sleep that is.

Loved it.

--shan

Enter the fucked up relationship. Poor Bruck! And Poor Xan. Those two should hook up :P. Awesome awesome fic Adair!

Oh, those two. I'd love to just bang their heads together and tell them to smarten up, but what fun would that be? :)

Beautiful angst in this one, Adair. I felt for both of them.

It's really going to stir things up when Qui gets in the mix. I'm looking forward to it. I'm loving this btw. Keep up the good work!

--shan

Thanks for the links and of course I'm hooked! :) I find the relationship between Obi and Xan a bit frustrating in that Obi is still clinging to the past and unable to move on with what Xan is offering. Big messup with Bruck! :( I too hope that Xan understands that Obi-Wan is still feeling the hurt from a betrayal learned too young. :) Good job with this, can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks guys! Posts may be a bit slower for awhile. I need to decide where these boys are headed. lol Plus Jinn enters the picture next and we all know how much I love writing him. NOT!

Those two... oh man do they got it coming soon! Poor guys :( both too stubborn to talk it out. Typical of those two!!

Can't wait for the reunion with Qui though! Oh my... now that is going to be interesting! Poor Bruck... I feel for him too poor guy.

Great chapter! Full of emotion!

"Shut up!" Bruck’s enraged scream echoed off the walls, his chest rising and falling with labored breaths. “You always were a filthy, disgusting, excuse for a person, Kenobi. It’s no wonder Master Qui-Gon left you to rot on Melida/Daan. He should have done the galaxy a favor and killed you when he had the chance.”


Oooooh, BURN! That was perfect! I love Bruck in this story, he's so damn cool. And of course, I love that he and Obi-Wan have some heat between them. :D Wasn't expecting that to be a factor!

How could you leave it at that? :p hehehehe Ohhh so the two are gonna give into their desires? *mischief grin*

Poor Xan... does he feel a mite bit jealous? :D

Great chapter!