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Thanks silver! I think it's safe to say that these two parties will soon be coming face-to-face. Should be...explosive!

i hope Obi-Wan meets them again, it'll be interesting to see everyone's reactions!

Well, when you told me you'd expanded on this I had no idea i'd find 5 more wonderful chapters! I just love the premise you've set up. Xan and Obi have a bond, Xan loves Obi, Obi is fighting it, Qui and Xan had a thing, Bruck was/is in love with Obi - so many delicious things going on.

Just have to wonder what's going to happen when everyone comes face to face and will that grudge of Obi's win over, or will he let it go in favor of love?

Wonderful work obi_ew! I just love your writing and characterizations. Thanks so much for helping me find my way here ;) I'll be back for sure. Wondering how often you're updating? Guess i'll have to check back. Again - lovely work.

--shan

Hi Shan! Nice to see you here. Glad you're enjoying the twists and turns. I know where I'd like Obi's eventual interest to be, but you never know with him. lol I'm going to try to update at least once a week but will do so more often if the story keeps flowing. Thanks for popping in.

Thanks again everyone! I'm having a blast with this so far and it's just pouring out at the moment. I have a few twists in store which I hope will please. And don't worry Birdy, Bruck will have his hands full with these two. lol

that. is. beautiful! i hope you update soon. i love the way xan keeps calling obi-wan 'brat'! very good:)

Yay! Plot! Hope to see more of it. I love the way you're taking this story. Somehow I have a feeling Xan's going to get what he wants in the end. Please don't hurt Bruck, but a threesome would be nice :-p

Another hot, hot chapter! More! I demand more!

Yummy!

Wowzers... hefty chapter there! Happy Naming Day indeed! Two gifts instead of one! *mischief grin* Great work!! *fans self* Whew it's getting hot in here! :D