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Wow, I was glancing around for something to read instead of doing my essay for five miutes...that was about an hour ago. I still haven't done my essay. I damn you while I praise you, you bewitching author, you.

*gasp* I go on vacation, and I come back to FIVE chapters!! Where do I start? I'm glad to see Obi-Wan in the temple finding himself. He's been so angsty throughout the story and needs to find some sort of peace with himself. I loved the Xan darkness. However, am I the only one that wants to see Xan humbled a little. We had a taste of it in that wonderful chapter when he gets smashed. Does he ever start to lose hope? But I'm patient...I realize it's probably not time for that yet...Obi-Wan's not ready.

By the way, since this story is nearing its end, I'm hoping another plot bunny will strike you regarding this pair. ;)

Lori- You raise some interesting questions. I think this visit will show Obi just where he doesn't belong anymore. ,) And he strikes me as the type of person who would leave a positive lasting impression on people whose loves he touches. That's why I figured his friends would be so glad to see him.

Shan- I never imagined this story would grow like this either. I really never expected it to take the twists and turnes it has. I just hope I can brin everyone together in a way that pleases. :) Can't wait for that vig! Christmas?! Get busy writing missy~!

I just love it when Xani goes a little Darkside, even if it means giving the kiddies a bit of a scare. His reaction to Eitan's kiss had my heart pumping....still able to taste Obi on his lips...delicious!

Eitan's lesson on patience was just what Xan needed. You would have thought the conversation was happening between a master and a padawan inside the temple! I wonder if Xan was muttering about that very thing as he was walking away. :p

And as much as I dislike Mace, his little cameo was cute.

Obi will be spending a few days in the temple...that should drive everyone nuts! As always, you're right...this experience should show Obi where he belongs, and the thought of that reunion warms my heart. This is such a fantastic love story that the sex, while hot and amazingly well written, has become a much smaller part of it. I say that, but then I recognize an underlying eroticism in the way you describe everything from the slant of a character's eyes to he way he walks. Even a simple breeze is used as a sensual caress. Decadent!

I'm running out of accolades. Ah, here's one I haven't used yet...

BRAVO!!!!!

Lori

Ancient Sith script, huh? That has my mind racing! You can tell me what it means...I promise not to tell Obi. :p

I'm loving how accepting everyone is being. I know Obi was expecting the worst, so this must bring him a measure of comfort. Obi can't become too comfortable, though. Even Yoda assumes Obi will see Xani long enough to be told what the necklace means. Besides, Obi has known far too much pleasure with Xan to live the rest of his life as a reclusive Jedi monk. Celibate Obi...talk about an oxymoron!

Hmmmm, if Obi won't come out of the temple, does that mean Xan will be forced to go in? Will both lost lambs be welcomed back to the flock?

This story has become an addiction. I check the board, at least, once a day. How many virtual Christmas cookies will it take to entice you to write a sequel? ;)

Lori

Ancient Sith Script? Interesting. If I wasn't intriqued before - this would certainly get my attention. Can't wait to find out what it means.

Loved the Yoda and Obi interaction. Its obvious that Obi was very loved as a child and made a long lasting impression on those he came into contact with - and still does apparently ;)

Yoda's analogy of the rainbow was very original and suits Obi well - good one. I'm glad Obi agreed to let Yoda help him to meditate - i'll bet it's exactly what he needs.

And again, i'm finding myself wondering just exactly what Xan is up to while all this is going on. Force, that man is addictive :D

I never imagined you'd take this bunny so far - i'm very much enjoying it, and find myself hoping it will just go on and on forever....silly as that sounds :) I know the inevitable end will come - but hopefully that just means that you have another delicious slash bunny in mind for our reading pleasure.

I'm hoping to have that viggie up by christmas - i'll let you know, but I think you're on my ff.n alert list anyways :D Back in a couple of days - hopefully that'll give you time to crank out another post. I still don't know how you do it girl - it takes me forever for one post!

--shan

Lori- This version of Eitan is fun to play with. And what makes you think Yoda will pop up? :p

Shan- Please let me know when you post that Bruck vig! Thanks for the kind words, they inspire me to keep plugging along. :)

Should have next post up sometime Friday.

You have a talent for writing mush witout making it overwhelming and sickeningly sweet. Perfect mixture, this post was. I found myself smiling through the entire read.

There was something incredibly sweet about Eitan adjusting Obi's hood and guiding him thru the Temple. While I suspect Xan will be jealous and territorial about the kiss the two shared - if he really thinks about it, i'm sure he'll be thankful for the emotional support that Eitan's been able to provide in his absense.

You wrote Bant beautifully, she is such a sweet and caring friend - just the person to put Obi at ease before he runs into Yoda :D

Bruck certainly has evolved as a character most recently in a lot of fics. It's good to see another side of him - you present him very well. He's a complicated character. I hope I can do him justice in my new 'Shades' viggie**crosses fingers**.

Have a Happy Thanksgiving, Adair! I dare say this is one of the most popular fics on this board - and a well deserved title. Keep up the good work girl - enjoy your turkey day :D

--shan

I remember reading the first part of this wonderful story a long time ago at m_a and being disappointed that there was no more of it. Imagine my joy to find it here. I adore this story and am always checking back to see if my next fix is up yet. It's the true romance that thrills me and its not soppy! Love that Obi is not making it easy for Xan it will make the final surrender all the sweeter.

Looking forward to more soon and to finding out what is written on the gold. I bet it will really floor our reluctant lover but hey - what do I know.

p.s. you are the only writer you has been able to make me like Bruck.

Xan might discover the kiss, huh? I'm lovin' me some Dark Side Xani, so I hope we get to see one more little peek of him.

Sigh...that was simply lovely! And I love that he couldn't help himself from telling Bant about Xan. Her advice was perfect.

I love mischievous Eitan. What a hoot! Who would expect a respected Jedi Master to lie to a little padawan? Xani must really be rubbing off on him. Ha!

I have a feeling the mush has only just begun. Obi's bound to run into Yoda soon. That meeting should be another tear jerker.

Thank you and have a Happy Thanksgiving!

Lori