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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shan- Bruck will address his feelings before this is over. And I’ll remind you that you said bring on the mush. lol
Lori- Oh I don’t think that kiss will go unnoticed. ;)
Blu_dragon- Aw! Thanks. That means so much.
Silentvondel- So glad it isn’t soppy! Hopefully I can keep it from going too far over the edge. As for the torque and bracelets, I too wonder what’s written on them. Lol And I’m glad Bruck is appealing. I’ve read a few stories recently that made me take a different look at him. Shans for one. :)
Let the mush begin!
Lori- Oh I don’t think that kiss will go unnoticed. ;)
Blu_dragon- Aw! Thanks. That means so much.
Silentvondel- So glad it isn’t soppy! Hopefully I can keep it from going too far over the edge. As for the torque and bracelets, I too wonder what’s written on them. Lol And I’m glad Bruck is appealing. I’ve read a few stories recently that made me take a different look at him. Shans for one. :)
Let the mush begin!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....just .....Wow.... Such a short chapter, but I think it's one of my favorites!
After turning down Xani, this came as a total surprise. I wonder if Xan will somehow be able to 'sense' this kiss?
I'm really looking forward to Obi's meetings with Bant and Yoda!
Lori
After turning down Xani, this came as a total surprise. I wonder if Xan will somehow be able to 'sense' this kiss?
I'm really looking forward to Obi's meetings with Bant and Yoda!
Lori
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story its one of my favorites. I always look forward to when u update. I hope your feeling better also. I cant wait for u to update again. Please do it soon.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Lori and Shan. :) I'm giving you this post since it's a short set up post. The next one may be a few days in coming. One because my vacation is over Tuesday, and two because it's going to be tougher to write. Don't want to tip the mush scales with it. lol
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a surprise! Never saw that one coming - but I have to admit, I really, REALLY liked it. Pretty damn hot, girl! Sweet on Eitan's part and very thorough on Obi's :D Definately my favorite part of that particular post - The Eitan and Obi smooch ;-)
I feel for Obi where Bruck is concerned too. Granted, I do want Bruck and Garen to be together and Xan and Obi - but it does kind of seem that Bruck abandoned him awfully quickly. I mean does he love Obi, or did he just think that he loved Obi??
Very appropriate place for Obi to go to get away from Xan. I'm glad it was his decision to go. I'm really looking forward to the Bant and Yoda conversations.
Chapter 40? Wow - you go girl! I haven't enjoyed a slash fic this much in a loooong while. Bring on the mush - I have complete faith in your ability to balance the mush. Mush is good :D
--shan
I feel for Obi where Bruck is concerned too. Granted, I do want Bruck and Garen to be together and Xan and Obi - but it does kind of seem that Bruck abandoned him awfully quickly. I mean does he love Obi, or did he just think that he loved Obi??
Very appropriate place for Obi to go to get away from Xan. I'm glad it was his decision to go. I'm really looking forward to the Bant and Yoda conversations.
Chapter 40? Wow - you go girl! I haven't enjoyed a slash fic this much in a loooong while. Bring on the mush - I have complete faith in your ability to balance the mush. Mush is good :D
--shan
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a way to wake up!
I thought you handled this perfectly. I loved that Xan remained calm in the face of Obi's anger. "I wont give up." Thats exactly what I wanted to hear him say. It's exactly what Obi wanted to hear him say too - even though he wont yet admit it.
You started the scene out beautifully. Those two are so hot together :) Xan was everything he needed to be here -his own hurt was also very prevalent. I was wondering about the necklace - if Obi was still wearing it, and what the meaning behind it was. Can't wait to find out.
Again - Bruck and Garen, very humorous. Somehow I sense this cute bickering will always be a part of their relationship. Though someday it would be nice to see them put some of their childhood issues to rest and recognize their feelings for each other - if not here, than a viggie perhaps? :D
Oh - and what a sweetie you are, Adair. I was here friday night, exactly as I said I would be - and I was not disappointed. Unfortunately I was unable to review until today. Sorry! You are the update Queen and I bow at your feet. No one else, to my knowledge, can match you. Keep up the good writing :)
--shan
I thought you handled this perfectly. I loved that Xan remained calm in the face of Obi's anger. "I wont give up." Thats exactly what I wanted to hear him say. It's exactly what Obi wanted to hear him say too - even though he wont yet admit it.
You started the scene out beautifully. Those two are so hot together :) Xan was everything he needed to be here -his own hurt was also very prevalent. I was wondering about the necklace - if Obi was still wearing it, and what the meaning behind it was. Can't wait to find out.
Again - Bruck and Garen, very humorous. Somehow I sense this cute bickering will always be a part of their relationship. Though someday it would be nice to see them put some of their childhood issues to rest and recognize their feelings for each other - if not here, than a viggie perhaps? :D
Oh - and what a sweetie you are, Adair. I was here friday night, exactly as I said I would be - and I was not disappointed. Unfortunately I was unable to review until today. Sorry! You are the update Queen and I bow at your feet. No one else, to my knowledge, can match you. Keep up the good writing :)
--shan
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm...what a delicious way to wake up. Talk about a dream 'come' true. (Booo...bad joke, I know. I just couldn't resist.) :p
Why can't Obi's head figure out what his heart and the rest of his body already know?!?!?! Stubborn ass!
Speaking of asses, I was laughing mine off reading Heckle and Jeckle blaming each other for not hearing Xan enter the apartment. Ha!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Lori
Why can't Obi's head figure out what his heart and the rest of his body already know?!?!?! Stubborn ass!
Speaking of asses, I was laughing mine off reading Heckle and Jeckle blaming each other for not hearing Xan enter the apartment. Ha!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Lori
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enter XanMan indeed :D I loved it!
There was something so very sweet about Xan curling up with Obi-Wan, just so happy to be near him. And for once - it wasn't sexual. Well, he wanted his young lover of course, but it was nice to see him put that aside and focus on deeper feelings.
Not only am I curious about Obi's reaction, but Bruck and Garen's as well. Should be very interesting come morning.
I'm glad Eitan gave Xan a little warning - and I hope it's not the last we see of the tall dark and handsome Jedi.
I was expecting a Xan post, but not a Xan/Obi post - so i'm extremely happy with this :D Now selfish little me wants MORE! Soon would be nice, but I know you've got others things going. And to be honest, you blow everyone else away with these quick updates - so I certainly can't complain. Back on friday ;-)
--shan
There was something so very sweet about Xan curling up with Obi-Wan, just so happy to be near him. And for once - it wasn't sexual. Well, he wanted his young lover of course, but it was nice to see him put that aside and focus on deeper feelings.
Not only am I curious about Obi's reaction, but Bruck and Garen's as well. Should be very interesting come morning.
I'm glad Eitan gave Xan a little warning - and I hope it's not the last we see of the tall dark and handsome Jedi.
I was expecting a Xan post, but not a Xan/Obi post - so i'm extremely happy with this :D Now selfish little me wants MORE! Soon would be nice, but I know you've got others things going. And to be honest, you blow everyone else away with these quick updates - so I certainly can't complain. Back on friday ;-)
--shan
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lori- Something tells me that Obi won’t be as eager as Bruck and Garen were.
Rian- This time away from Obi has done wonders for Xan. I think he knows just what he wants. Doesn’t mean he won’t have a battle on his hands.
Shan- Eitan and Garen hum? Interesting! I think Obi will find some comforting, although he may not be happy about it. Enter Xanman.
Rian- This time away from Obi has done wonders for Xan. I think he knows just what he wants. Doesn’t mean he won’t have a battle on his hands.
Shan- Eitan and Garen hum? Interesting! I think Obi will find some comforting, although he may not be happy about it. Enter Xanman.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh! Even though all Hell is going to break loose when Obi wakes up, I'm thrilled that Xani gets to spend one more night of comfort in Obi's arms. Sigh...that was lovely!
I'm going to make some popcorn and pull up a chair to read your next chapter. I've always loved fireworks and the sparks between our boys should be good!
Lori
I'm going to make some popcorn and pull up a chair to read your next chapter. I've always loved fireworks and the sparks between our boys should be good!
Lori