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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! I wanted to have hot make-up sex scene! But I loved this chapter anyway! Now, when do they get to have hot make-up sex????
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so excited to see Obi-Wan's reaction when he wakes up! He goes to sleep thinking about him and wakes up with him...that's a neat trick.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
: ) This made me smile. I'm glad to see Obi-wan taking responsibility...seeing potential for someone he's grown to care about. I'm also glad to see him missing Xan. It's good that you set aside a moment of longing instead of anger...will we see a similar moment with Xan? Can't wait to see what Xan is up to.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 37 Review:
Tried leaving a review sunday, but site problems thwarted me :D
Wonderful interactions between Garen, Obi, Bruck and Eitan. Bruck and Garen are not only hot together, they are actually quite humorous in their stubborn denial of obvious attraction. I enjoyed Eitan's comments and observations of the three friends. The tussle between Bruck and Garen was funny and well done, as was their mutual tumble back into the room.
Vow of chastity for Eitan? What a bummer. This is so not a hint, but I could almost see Eitan and Garen as a very interesting pairing ;-)
Chapter 38 Review:
So Obi is missing Xan, but not really wanting to. Our poor Obi is so confused. Yes, I think working out some of these other issues will help him feel more stable and secure.
It was sweet how he started the process of realization for Bruck and Garen, and so sad that he is so lonely in the next room. I'd love to see them go curl up with him for the night....when they are finished of course ;)
The suspense is mounting, but in a good way. I'm dying for more Xan and whatever his next move is....but its definately a sweet wait. This pairing has got to be my absolute favorite, and with you pulling the strings - it threatens to be (almost) too much for me :D Keep up the good work - can't wait for more.
--shan
Tried leaving a review sunday, but site problems thwarted me :D
Wonderful interactions between Garen, Obi, Bruck and Eitan. Bruck and Garen are not only hot together, they are actually quite humorous in their stubborn denial of obvious attraction. I enjoyed Eitan's comments and observations of the three friends. The tussle between Bruck and Garen was funny and well done, as was their mutual tumble back into the room.
Vow of chastity for Eitan? What a bummer. This is so not a hint, but I could almost see Eitan and Garen as a very interesting pairing ;-)
Chapter 38 Review:
So Obi is missing Xan, but not really wanting to. Our poor Obi is so confused. Yes, I think working out some of these other issues will help him feel more stable and secure.
It was sweet how he started the process of realization for Bruck and Garen, and so sad that he is so lonely in the next room. I'd love to see them go curl up with him for the night....when they are finished of course ;)
The suspense is mounting, but in a good way. I'm dying for more Xan and whatever his next move is....but its definately a sweet wait. This pairing has got to be my absolute favorite, and with you pulling the strings - it threatens to be (almost) too much for me :D Keep up the good work - can't wait for more.
--shan
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Clearing their throats and straightening mussed clothes, they smiled in unison. “We’re both staying!”
Ha! I loved your description of 'The Two Stooges'! They make a perfect couple.
Oh Obi...being so stubborn. I believe the appropriate line is, "Twice the pride, double the fall!"
Beautiful, as always.
Lori
Ha! I loved your description of 'The Two Stooges'! They make a perfect couple.
Oh Obi...being so stubborn. I believe the appropriate line is, "Twice the pride, double the fall!"
Beautiful, as always.
Lori
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rian- That’s means a lot. Thanks. I want this to more than just sex without substance. Nothing wrong with that, I enjoy those stories myself, I’m just more used to getting inside the characters minds.
Lori- I wouldn’t count on seeing anymore Obi and Bruck moments. They both have other parties who wouldn’t like it very much.
Shan- Sorry Xan has been scare. I think before Obi can commit, he needs to work out all of these other issues. Xan isn’t in today’s new post, but he will pop back up in the next one. Thanks for being patient.
Blu_dragon- Thanks dear. It means a lot that you delurked. If it makes you feel any better, I’ve never abandoned a story yet. J
Lori- I wouldn’t count on seeing anymore Obi and Bruck moments. They both have other parties who wouldn’t like it very much.
Shan- Sorry Xan has been scare. I think before Obi can commit, he needs to work out all of these other issues. Xan isn’t in today’s new post, but he will pop back up in the next one. Thanks for being patient.
Blu_dragon- Thanks dear. It means a lot that you delurked. If it makes you feel any better, I’ve never abandoned a story yet. J
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Purrrrrrr! Obi as the puppet master was simply delicious.
Maybe Eitan will serve the same role for Obi and Xan? Nah, they're not through suffering yet. :p
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Lori
Maybe Eitan will serve the same role for Obi and Xan? Nah, they're not through suffering yet. :p
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Lori
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I just wanted to tell u that I love this fic its great! One of my faves to keep up w/. I really don't review all that much but I wanted to tell u that I hope u keep updating this one. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Your a great writer keep it up! *hugs*
blu_dragon
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
11/12/05 - I'm starting to go into withrawals here! It isn't pretty. I need my 'Cure' fix - and soon.
--Shan :D
--Shan :D
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While i'm very patiently waiting for more of Xan, I want you to know how much I am seriously enjoying these transitional chapters. You are bringing everything together so nicely and it's quite satisfying for me as a reader. Obi's life appears to be coming full circle and I'm willing to bet he'll get the closure he needs to be able to heal and move on - and accept what Xan wants to give him as well.
Obi appears to use his sexuality to get what he wants, whether he's aware of it or not. I can't wait for the scene with Xan where he finally realizes there's more to sex than just...sex - that what two people can share can be much more than just physical attraction.
Continuing to enjoy this very much - can't wait for more :)
--shan
Obi appears to use his sexuality to get what he wants, whether he's aware of it or not. I can't wait for the scene with Xan where he finally realizes there's more to sex than just...sex - that what two people can share can be much more than just physical attraction.
Continuing to enjoy this very much - can't wait for more :)
--shan