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You tease...I thought Bruck and Obi were going to have one last hurrah. ;)

Yeah! Hopefully, this will be the first of many happy reunions. Once Obi makes peace with his past, maybe he can move on with his future.

Lori

Hey, I like the smut, don't get me wrong. However, I was glad to see Bruck stop Obi-Wan...of course, I'm sure he thought it was only temporary. Now, was he jealous of Obi-Wan or Garen? Or are we looking forward to another threesome? *sigh* too bad Xan's not there...although, I'm not sure Xan is too interested in sharing Obi-Wan again. I'm protective of Xan and it's getting painful to watch Obi-Wan have sex with other people...unless he realizes it's unfulfilling. Sorry about my suggestive rambling...please ignore it...I'm enjoying the story regardless of who's doing who. : ) If you tug at my heart strings while reading, that's a kudos to you...and you've done that many times.

Wonderful chapter. Aalto is such a good friend to Bruck -and knows him so well. I'm glad we got to see Bant - I was wondering if you would include her.

My - rumors do spread quickly don't they, even at the Jedi Temple ;-) Brucks reaction was true to the character we were first introduced to in the JA books - but so noticeably matured in this AU of yours. This is going to be painful for him - but I have a feeling someone will be there to help him pick up the pieces. And I truly do hope that he and Obi can be good friends - much as Xan may not like it.

I have no doubt that Obi will make Xan work for it - and I'm very much looking forward to it. Can't wait for the make up sex though :D

And something tells me Obi will be confronted with one Garen Muln alot sooner than expected. Something also tells me that Bruck isn't going to be too happy about it! Can't wait!

--shan

Lori- Xan is a charmer isn't he? Just something delicious about him. :)

Shan- I fully intend to have just such a scene at some point. The rate things are going, there may be more than one. ;)

Rian- I don't think Obi will make it easy on Xan. :D

I'm so glad Bant's in this story! She, of all people, will be able to set Obi straight (well, not too straight :-p ) and help him work through his feelings.

Bruck is being followed, huh? Good! The sooner Xani finds Obi, the sooner we can watch the fireworks ignite!

As much as I'm looking forward to seeing the guy together again, I really enjoy these chapters with Bruck. Even though he's 'the other man', I'm starting to like him.

Lori

I'm so glad to see Xan going after what he wants...doesn't he always? I love the interaction between him and Eitan. I'm interested in seeing if Obi will just fly into his arms, or make him work for it (without pushing him away, of course).

Gulp! That was a sinfully delicious chapter. I'm heading off to bed with visions of naked Jedi dancing in my head. Ha!

Xan has quickly become one of my favorite Star Wars characters. Well...AU Xan, that is. Purrrrrrr!

Lori

I'm so glad that Eitan didn't take Xan up on his offer. He's just full of integrity - and it suits him well.

Poor Obi - he seems so lonely.

That said - I have a request ;-) I'm just absolutely dying for a sweet sex scene. You've had some great, hot scenes and I've enjoyed them all. But I would love to read a scene (when the timing is right of course) when Xan and Obi finally stop being so stubborn and can admit their feelings - a sweet and gentle sex scene that's all about love and much less about sex. With Obi's past - it seems exactly what he needs.

I'm glad you are enjoying this as much as I am :D I hate to see it end, though eventually I know it will :(

You rule, girl! Keep coming with the awesome updates.

--shan

Shan- Hey I updated both places in one day. Yay me! Lol This chapter was kind of just a fun one for me. I love when Xan is being naughty and Eitan is such an easy foil for him.

Anon- Yoda as matchmaker hum? I can see that.

Lori- Ha! Garen will reap some benefits from Bruck’s time with Obi Won’t he? If they get together that is. ;) I love writing this story. I adore the characters and it’s fun putting them in situations they’d never be in in the films or books.

Gooo Yoda!!! :)
The little green jedi will be the perfect match maker hehehe