rate_review Reviews

I doubt very much I could find the words to describe the total admiration for the way you have written this, and your way with words. It is utterly beautiful. The characters tones, the dialect, seems flawless to the point I found it hard to believe I wasn't reading Manfredi's novel of Alexander. I have a lot of admiration for you and your skill at writing. Consider this a metaphorical handshake or a squeeful, fangirlish hug.

Dionne

you're are really a great writer. your descriptions are great and your words flow beautifully please update soon!

Damn that was freaking sad..... i liked it... but could ya throw a little joy in there somewhere. Real life isn't a a romance novel. but hell a fanfic is close enough HAPPY ENDING PLEASE!!!

Alexander should not be forgiven!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...................................yet!

Your story made me cry. It is an amazingly well written piece of work and I loved reading it, please write more soon.

Thanks
Shine

Dear Rothalion,

I have read this fic several times but it always seems so fresh, so new to me.
And it always stir my emotions.....I feel such emphathy and understanding for Heph.
Alexander's selfish cruelty and Heph passions as he so violently reacts to his father's death, Alexander's betrayal and his own hopelessness is so tangible, you could touch it.

You already know that I think this fic is awesome and I am glad that you have posted it here.

This is interesting. Hephaistion is the true picture of fury and despair. Alexander realising that he's gone to far this time, and the pain of Hephaistion's declaration and act. Milo's devotion is admirable. But I kinda got the feeling there's more comming. Like you can't end it here.

Review #2 is mine, but I forgot to put on name and shit.