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for An Even Greater Sin

by theskywolves

person Marresh4000
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! The first chapter is good!!! When I've read the next amazing bit I'll review again. Love love love from Marresh
person Marresh4000
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If nobody else has guessed correctly...I think the band is meant to be Pink Floyd (I think that's how you spell it). Love love love from Marresh.
person Raine
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that this is one of the best fan fics i have read in a long time. It is beautful and very well written. I look forawrd to reading your other story. How you protrayed love was in a wonderful fashion and is very encouraging. I think alot of people are afraid to love now a days and this just goes to show that no matter who you love it can be wonder ful thing. Thank you so much for writting such an inspiration piece of work.

person Raine
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that this is one of the best fan fics i have read in a long time. It is beautful and very well written. I look forawrd to reading your other story. How you protrayed love was in a wonderful fashion and is very encouraging. I think alot of people are afraid to love now a days and this just goes to show that no matter who you love it can be wonder ful thing. Thank you so much for writting such an inspiration piece of work.

person Robyn
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...! Great ending. 'Can't wait for the sequel.
person Cassie
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes it was evil to leave it off there! BUT THERE WILL BE A SEGUEL?! SO VADER WON'T DIE?! PLEEEEEEEEEEASE don't kill him! *Gives big puppy dog eyes* pwease?
person Ladynaye
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp*

The last chapter and this whole story just made me cry. Seriously. You did all of the characters right. They feel right and they were all so emotional. Please write a sequel. PLEASE!!
person Suzanne
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading you story it was a very original take on the relationship between Anakin and Luke. Your story was beautifully written and you could feel only genuine sympathy for them both and I found your work of fiction both sad, and beautiful. I look forward to read the sequal and seeing where the force takes both father and son. Sue ;)
person Cassie
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! they can sleep together now! ^--------^ i love how close you keep it to the movies, its like the same thing but with love and anguish more present. i so want the sequel, please bring it out quickly? =D
person Ladynaye
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must wonder...WHO was the ghost who pushed Anakin back to the real world?!?