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for An Even Greater Sin

by theskywolves

person Ladynaye
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story kicks so much ass!! Hmmm, it seems that Vader doesn't want Luke to love him in a sexual way?? Man fuck that shit!! Just get your boy and fuck him! hehe
person Ladynaye
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Which scenes will get a rewrite? And WOW, that chapter just....floored me......Luke seemed so right too!!
person Robyn
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm never going to be able to watch to fight scenes between Vader and Luke with a straight face ever again, but, hey, that's okay. ^_^ I think Leia was very in character. Update soon.
person Ladynaye
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS!! It was hard for me to READ this chapter!! My poor Luke and Vader, such conflict between them!! And Vader can't even feel his cock anymore?!?! Oh man....

MORE PLEASE!!
person Ladynaye
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww man!! Vader can't fuck anymore?!?! Give him a mechanical cock or something!!! Keep up the good work!!
person Robyn
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...there really isn't anything I can say that I haven't already. ^_^ Update!
person Jani
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
3 chapters !!!!!!!! thank you :)
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, well thought out, well-written, just keeps getting better. It's not weird or "messed up" at all, so don't feel apologetic about it! I'm anxious for more!
person Turks Neon Drink
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So when i first started this story it was by accident. I am not really fond of Luke but the more i stayed reading thje more i found myself not able to stop reading. Really Really good work. I can not wait till part to. Ohh yeah i also wanted to tell you how cool you named you chapters. I am working on a fic with my sister and we just number them i thought your way was really cool. Keep up the good work and update soon.

Turks
person Ladynaye
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! That was too much!! Dear lord.....that was insane....MORE PLEASE!!