rate_review Reviews

This was an amazing story. Hands down, phenomenal. At first, I was expecting gratuitous fucking from the get go, as many stories on here feature, but from the very first chapter I was hooked on the characters, the plot, and all I wanted was to see where they'd end up... I loved Darynn, and loved your portrayals of the canon characters and their relationships. Oftentimes with stories that have a genuine plot trajectory on this site, the sex, when it happens, isn't a significant event in and of itself; the characters could go on their merry way to the story's conclusion with or without sex, if need be. Here, however, everything served a purpose. Each and every sexual interaction contributed to the development of the characters and the story, while at the same time being damn good examples of smut. Thank you for writing what has been one of the best stories I have read in a very long while.

That was hot.

:holds tissue up to stifle nosebleed*

Man, I hate it when fics take on a mind of their own and don't follow directions. That was a great ending to the fic though, I enjoyed it. I was surprised at the proposal though, I always assumed she would just leave in the middle of the night and he'd let her. Pride is a terrible burden sometimes.

Anyway, thanks for the lurid and descriptive sex. I enjoyed in immensely. *Huge shit-eating grin*

Keep on writing, you do Vin's characters proud. *Salutes*

Oh god...Femslash AND Dom being sexy as hell.

*whimpers*

I....you might be my new favorite author. I adore Treacherous already. ^-^

WOW

Great story!! And had to be the best ending i have ever read!

Oh, I like this.

I remember bookmarking it a while ago but I never got around to finishing it. I've been pretty busy lately. I only got as far as chapter seven or eight. :(

Still, it looks promising. I can't wait to finish it. Is it complete?

I love it so far. Your original characters are awesome and as always you portray the canon characters perfectly. :)

Keep up the fabulous work. ^_^

OMFG this was wonderful...I hated that it had to end...this was...specfuckintacular!!

Very very naughty story, and I love it.

Well I liked it! It may have been a struggle to come up with an ending but I think you did a fab job. I like happy endings and I like to think of people as getting the things they want and need, if no where else but in a story or a movie. This, as well as your other stories, was well written and thank you so much for all the lovely smut and hot sex cause again, it is nice to see it happening somewhere! Now what is next? I can't wait to see what kind of ride you have panned. Thanks again for sharing!