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for Be All, End All

by Chriscent

person sandrasmit19
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, just awesome. The end was so sweet and yet so hot at the same time, lol.
person Anon
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was a good ending. great story all together. i hope you write another one...not a sequel but another story..
person S
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok here it is 1:41 am and I have to be up at 5am to get ready for work.....I read this story once before(up until chapter 30) and i just read it all again tonight....it was a great story, and I loved the ending, im a sucker for happy endings!!! Oh hell, I loved the entire story, not JUST the ending!

Thanks for writing it and posting it for all of us to read!!!
person avidreader
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so sweet!! My favorite story EVERon this site and judging by the rest of your stories this one was not a fluke. Thanks so much for the awesome story, the consistent updating and thanks for not rushing the story at the end. I can't wait for your next story!!
person Cina
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooo, happy ending!! Burning the trailer made me laugh. Excellent job- it's been a great read, I'm so glad you shared it with us. Thanks!
person eryn
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! It can't be over this is the only F&F fic worth reading! It was truly great, hopefully you'll do another, and if not then at least you have more time to devote to your Riddick fics. Love your writing though and hope that you do a lot more of it.
person bebe
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that chapter just gave me the shakes... i had butterflys all through reading it... didnt he just propose?? *takes deep shaky breath*
person Phreak
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was... there are no words, I was totally taken by surprise and I loved every minute of it! Please say it's not over!
person lily
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I can feel you staring to wrap it up a little bit and you're doing a superb job....keep writng please :))
person bebe
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good work, it was nice to see some of the conflicting emotions between the too.. without them ending up fucking in the scene haha not that i mind the visuals, but it showed ur versatility when u write. which alot of people lack. continue (-: