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for Be All, End All

by Chriscent

person Avidreader
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still by far my favorite story on this site. I love that they are both insecure about each other and that they realize there is more than just sex. Thanks for updating regularly. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Thanks!!
person um...
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are awesome! Good work... *pats author on the back*
and yeah...
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how's about another chappie 'fore monday morning and i have to go work again
person Phreak
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The imagery itself was just guh! I LOVE your fic! Seriously, Darynn is great and the way Dom treats her, I love that she seems to puzzle him and excite him at the same time. And the Letty talk, I was so waiting for that, it's like she's an equal, not just a fuck but not really a girlfriend either. Can't wait to read more.
person bebe
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whats it going to be??
person Ls5byz
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found your stuff and now you are on my favorites - this story is so hot I can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing is highly descriptive and I can see what is happening. You are a very talented writer, thanks so much for sharing the gift!
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kinda seems like Darynn didn't even want Vince to fuck her in the ass?? IS she that obsessed with Dom? Good chapter though - hell great chapter! Scratch that a great story! I'm really interested as to how this will pan out
person bebe
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
come on how can u leave it like that!? the next chapter better make up for all your little stops.. i want some hot sex with dom!!! (lol who doesnt?) hahaha
person lily
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up! The next Dom and Rynn chapter should be great...i kove that they seem to be a little more personal with each other than anyone else. I'll always be lobbying for a Dom/Darynn "relationship" in the end
person avidreader
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God! Every chapter I read just gets hotter and hotter!!! I love the sexual tension between Dom and Daryn, can't wait for the next chapter. Excellent writing!!