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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh, nice scene....will dom be jealous?
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...This has been such a fun ride (oops, pun not intended) that I hope we get a cheerful ending, too. Great stuff regardless. Good work!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was totally wicked!
HAHA
"They didn't"
hahahah
HAHA
"They didn't"
hahahah
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! an update, please keep it coming
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice! I enjoyed reading ALL of this in one sitting! Its like 1:49 a.m and I am Whipped! So I'm not gonna write much here! LOL! *Yawns* Oh man! This is one of the best ficts I have read! The entire story kept me gessing about what was going to happen next! You have a great plot line going and you are keeping the characters in.....um....character! LOL! Please update soon I am dying to know what happens next!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I figured after enjoying 23 chapters of your story the least i could do is review and tell you how much i like it...if your taking requests make it a dom darynn thing in the end, pretty please with a cherry on top!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting good...im not a very big fan of guy on guy....matter of fact, it does nothing for me, but you made it sound really good...good work...liked it....not loved it, but consider urself a good writer if i liked it...cuz i ussually dont. liked this chapter too...no i loved it....
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i nearly exploded when i saw chapter twenty three up. Low and Vince turning up at Daryns truck like that was well weird - do we get an explanation for that?? More soon please
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I'm really interested as to how you will finish this whole story. Not that I want it to end, but I am curious. Now we know that Dom likes guys too - or does he? The way you described his actions left me thinking that he likes guys bt isn't keen on fucking them. But anyway, now we know he is inclined to guys, this leads me to believe that perhaps he and Vince or Leon or one of the others may have been involved in a little action as well. I'm looking forward to as many updates as you give us. Please continue! :)