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for Be All, End All

by Chriscent

person lolly pop
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as the little boy from the incredibles says:

"that was totally wicked!"

maybe because it's 8.47 am on a saturday morning, but damn, that's gotten my weekend going.
person volume
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great way to end the chapter
person Cina
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're doing a great job; please keep it up!
person bebe
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol poor dom
person LAUREN
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA
I LOVE YOUR DOM

DARYNN DOESN'T FALL TO HIS EVERY WHIM, AND HE'S NOT PORTRAYED AS 'PERFECT' LIKE HE IS IN SO MANY FICS. I LIKE THAT YOU'RE NOT MOVING THE MOVING THE STORY TOO QUICKLY, BUT NOT PAIN STAKINGLY SLOW EITHER. THE TENSION IS ALREADY AT BREAKING POINT WITH ROME/DOM, DARYNN/DOM/DARYNN/DOM/ROME AND THAT SLAMMED DOOR IN THE FACE?! OUJA! NOT GOING TO LIKE THAT ONE IS HE????? REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTERS, AND THANKS FOR POSTING WHAT YOU HAVE ALREADY.
person SilverCircle
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the updates! Keep 'em coming :)
person mm4ever
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story....i cant wait to read more so please update again soon!!!!!
person bebe
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quote- yeah. I remember that little bitch. It was hot.”- hahahahaha BRILLIANT!
person lauren
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! good one. you're an excellent writer. please continue
person bebe
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god the tension of this story is killin me! man, y oh y wont they hook up! LoL