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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far. Keep up the good work. Please update soon :)
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great can't wait to read more
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn...you've got 1500++ hits, and yet only ten reveiews? what's wrong with these people who are reading? by far the best FATF fiction on here (IMO anyway). Janna/Darynn was a bit of surprise, but it was good. It didn't jerk the story which sometimes happens. I didn't know you had updated, I'll be checking back a bit more often, see what's kicking. Keep it coming!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo I was loosing hope that you'd leave the story for a moment
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait till you update. Will dom find out she's an O'Connor?Will he care?
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please more! I'm down on my knees begging! The resistance this girl has is admireable! I'd probably already have jumped him!
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Chris,
Wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. The give and take between Darynn and the guys is great. I'm also lovin' the part about the "lovers". Hmmm? Something to think about.
I've read some of your stuff on other sights too and I have to say, you have to be one of my favorites.
I can't wait to read the next chapter on this one. I'll keep tabs.
Munchkin
Wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. The give and take between Darynn and the guys is great. I'm also lovin' the part about the "lovers". Hmmm? Something to think about.
I've read some of your stuff on other sights too and I have to say, you have to be one of my favorites.
I can't wait to read the next chapter on this one. I'll keep tabs.
Munchkin
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really dig your story, Darynn is a very original and strong character and I love how she interacts with the team, especially Vince. My curiosity is piqued in regards to the whole Vince Dom thing and of course I can't wait to see what kind of trouble Darynn gets into with Dom next. Keep up the great work!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing stuff. I love the way you write. This seems a very unique piece of fiction, the relationship that dom and vince have is very intriguing. please continue and update this soon. looking forward to reading more of this.
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!! I really hope you continue on soon. I am lovin it.