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for The Thin Line

by JayCeeBee

schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it , possable pappy would do somthing like that to mara, and your true to luke charater as well. humane with with needs too, but understanding and kind once he knew why she so scared and decused. and leing her beat him. kike she did that was true love on his part

great story
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is great and this story is really interesting. I don't usually read multi-chapter stories, but loved your other one so I gave it a look. Sweet and sexy.
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You finished it! w00t - thank you!! :) Wonderful ending! I wouldn't mind getting a certain blue-eyed Jedi alone with some stun cuffs and blissberry cream myself, LOL.

I loved this line: "And every time they made love, she healed that much more."

Perfect!!

~Arica


person Prophecy Girl
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And, in what will seem to be a mirroring of your review of my latest, I do not normally read or enjoy Luke/Mara fics. I stick to the father, and avoid the son. That being said, I really enjoyed this piece. Your opening chapter sucked me in right away, and convinced me to keep reading.

You have a very distinct, very effective writing style. Keep up the good work.

person DMS
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!!! I love that ending!!! Luke is now one happy man. Mara is making it up to him for all the lost time they spent just cuddling. LOL.

WONDERFUL FIC!!! You are a fantastic writer!!

DMS
person RM
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ýou've captured the characters perfectly. I was intrigued to see someone finally explore the aftermath of what had to be a brutal life as the Emperor's Hand realistically. Bravo!! Very, very well done. I loved the character of Silver as well. Again, bravo.
person I M Mara
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When will the epologue be up?
person DMS88
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really hot JayCee. So is this the end or are you going to write that epilogue you were thinking about? Wonderful fic, but all of your fics are wonderful. Great job!!!
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LUV it!!!!! More? Please? ;)
person DMS
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Hot sex scene! Excellent chapter. I am glad she figured a way to get around her phobia.