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for The Thin Line

by JayCeeBee

person Mara Look-a-like
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Finally. Please update soon.
person NaughtyJedi
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read all of the chapters yet, but I LOVE what I've read so far! Bravo!
person kayladie
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's such a realistic possibility of what Mara's psyche might have been like after dealing with the Emperor's twisted self all those years. But hopefully, Luke will be helping her heal! Great job!
person AgiVega
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mara... and poor Luke (I can't say anything else just repeating this, LOL). I'm wondering what Mara is planning... I hope it's something that will really help them solve this... problem. Luke really needs to get laid at last!
person ghostrider
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
she is NOT gonna to do what i think she's gonna to do, is she?!?! cause if she does, i doubt even luke will be forgiving her anytime soon. he might be a understanding guy, but a guy has to have limits.
person DMS
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Luke is taking the news fairly well. He must be the most understanding man in the galaxy. Poor Luke. I foresee a lot of cold showers in his future. lol Let us hope that Mara and Luke can work through this problem so we can get to some intense love scenes. Great job!

~DMS~
person AgiVega
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel more and more sorry for Luke. I feel with Mara, but deep down I am also mad at her. She should have told Luke about her problem before they married. It wasn't fair what she did. Luke had a right to know about Mara's hate for sex before they got married. She should have given him a chance to say no to the wedding or something (not that Luke WOULD HAVE said no, but it still would have been the honest thing to do and Mara didn't do it - she was dishonest).
person Mara Look-a-like
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok well I don't want to kill you but I do have to say that that sucks for Luke. I sort of feel bad for him on second thought I feel really bad for him. Well I truely hope that Luke & Mara can work through this so they can share there love in every way possible.
person DMS
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see that you finally were able to post chapter three. Great chapter. Mara doesn't like sex!!! Well, that is probably because she has never did any Force-enhanced bootknocking with a certain blue-eyed Jedi Master. LOL.

Great job!

~DMS~
person AgiVega
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mara... I wonder who made her hate sex (Palpy?)... I hope Luke will manage to make her like it... *wink wink*
Keep it coming, I'm truly interested in this story!