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by glawar

person Viv
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yuuummmmmmy! slash rocks and this is so hot... i love the reed/johnny pairing and the entire thought process! plzzzz write more- i will just sit here and wait patiently
person Artemis
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! you can't end that way!! NO!! oh! is this a set up for a shower scene? update soon!!

Goddess Artemis
person Challengefic Cassandra
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! you mentioned my car! I love that car, it go's so fast. . . i thnk i have a car fetish. Oh! hay, they Kissed!! i was so cought up on the car i almost missed it, lol. Great Chapter, i'm looking forward to the next ones.
person pyke
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAH! fricking awesome, any chance of johnny getting a shower scene, or is that just my fantasy
person glawar
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty guys... got chpt 3 up :) thanks for the feedback! Oh and their should be some more action and also some Von Doom coming up in the next chapter or two.
person Challengefic Cassandra
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes!! finaly another slash fic!! glad i could help, lol. i love the start, but get to the good stuff!! lol, update soon, i love it so far.
person Artemis
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO! more plz!!! great start, btw. i can't wait for the next chapters

Goddess Artemis
person scyllablue
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, Reed and Johnny slash. About time! A really good beginning so far. The only awkward sentence that threw me was near the end: Why didn't he not . . . If you break it out Reed says 'Why did not he not? Otherwise I thought your writing was excellent and am looking forward to some angst.
person Litrouke
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!1111111 How coud u evr wright a fic lyk dis? Ur so sick & gros!!!11!! EWWWW! & it wasnt evn rightten good! UR a loser!!!!11!!!
Now, before you brutally murder me- JUST KIDDING. ^_^ I love Reed's thoughts, so scientific and in-character. And, of course, who doesn't love hearing about Johnny's abs? :P Update soon; I want to see how a relationship like this could actually work out.
SLASH RULES! *scampers away*