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for Pickup Game

by lesa

person Valiant
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was fantastic. I sat here and read most of your fics and I really enjoy your writing. You write damn good lemons and I hope someday to do sex the way you do. Hot and passionate.
person Chriscent
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. These were secretly two of my favorite characters in this movie.

Love your description of their feelings, and making them in character while having them want something else.

Chris
person cas
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was cool. Very, very nicely written. It was an honor to read.
person The Summoning Dark
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww! I never had him down as the sweet type, but you wrote them both so well, especially Call.
person jaden
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was great. very...cool! ;)